From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Aug 18 11:04:40 2003 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4827937B40C; Mon, 18 Aug 2003 11:04:38 -0700 (PDT) Received: from ms-smtp-01.southeast.rr.com (ms-smtp-01.southeast.rr.com [24.93.67.82]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 98F8743FAF; Mon, 18 Aug 2003 11:04:37 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from marcus@FreeBSD.org) Received: from creme-brulee.marcuscom.com (rdu57-17-158.nc.rr.com [66.57.17.158])h7IHvncs026873; Mon, 18 Aug 2003 13:57:49 -0400 (EDT) Received: from [10.2.1.4] (vpn-client-4.marcuscom.com [10.2.1.4]) h7II3qUA064052; Mon, 18 Aug 2003 14:03:52 -0400 (EDT) (envelope-from marcus@FreeBSD.org) From: Joe Marcus Clarke To: "Simon L. Nielsen" In-Reply-To: <20030818125337.GB407@FreeBSD.org> References: <1061069299.54862.34.camel@shumai.marcuscom.com> <20030817110722.GA391@FreeBSD.org> <1061131638.43833.2.camel@shumai.marcuscom.com> <20030818125337.GB407@FreeBSD.org> Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha1; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="=-ex7W6s0VXkUmcun888Ef" Organization: FreeBSD, Inc. Message-Id: <1061229879.730.54.camel@gyros> Mime-Version: 1.0 X-Mailer: Ximian Evolution 1.4.4 Date: Mon, 18 Aug 2003 14:04:39 -0400 X-Spam-Status: No, hits=-11.6 required=5.0 tests=BAYES_01,EMAIL_ATTRIBUTION,IN_REP_TO,PGP_SIGNATURE_2, QUOTED_EMAIL_TEXT,REFERENCES,REPLY_WITH_QUOTES, USER_AGENT_XIMIAN autolearn=ham version=2.55 X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 2.55 (1.174.2.19-2003-05-19-exp) cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: Review of porters-handbook changes X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 18 Aug 2003 18:04:40 -0000 --=-ex7W6s0VXkUmcun888Ef Content-Type: text/plain Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Mon, 2003-08-18 at 08:53, Simon L. Nielsen wrote: > On 2003.08.17 10:47:18 -0400, Joe Marcus Clarke wrote: > > On Sun, 2003-08-17 at 07:07, Simon L. Nielsen wrote: > > > On 2003.08.16 17:28:19 -0400, Joe Marcus Clarke wrote: > > > > Can someone review the attached diff to the porter's handbook? It = was > > > > submitted by Sergey Matveychuk for some of the recent > > > > ports infrastructure changes. It is technically accurate, and I fi= xed a > > > > few grammar and spelling nits, but I would like a doc committers ta= ke on > > > > it before committing. Also, if one of you would rather commit, tha= t's > > > > fine. Thanks! > > >=20 > > > There are some places where 8 spaces have been used instead of a tab > > > (can be fixed by marking the regions and using 'meta-x tabify' in > > > emacs'). There are also some end of line white-spaces which should b= e > > > removed. > >=20 > > I tried to preserve the style of adjacent blocks. To that end, some us= e > > spaces, so I opted for spaces to keep things lined up. >=20 > OK, I didn't check the rest for the file for style, and the tab/space > thing is not that important then. >=20 > But the end of line whitespace still doesn't need to be there :). It's > not crucial to remove it, but there is no reason to have it there. >=20 > Sorry for being so pedantic about this... >=20 > I have attached a patch where I have removed the end of line whitespace, > and changed the pkg_deinstall reference (see below). >=20 > > --- doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml 17 Aug 2003 09= :12:05 -0000 1.320 > > +++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml 17 Aug 2003 14= :46:25 -0000 > > @@ -4316,6 +4086,19 @@ > > > > > > =20 > > + > > + <filename>pkg-deinstall</filename> > > + > > + This script executes when a package is removed. > > + > > + > > + This script will be run twice by pkg_delete. >=20 > It's better to use "&man.pkg.delete.1;" instead of the command tag since > it will create a link to the manual page. Thanks! Committed with your suggestions after doing a full make of doc/. Joe --=20 Joe Marcus Clarke FreeBSD GNOME Team :: marcus@FreeBSD.org gnome@FreeBSD.org FreeNode / #freebsd-gnome http://www.FreeBSD.org/gnome --=-ex7W6s0VXkUmcun888Ef Content-Type: application/pgp-signature; name=signature.asc Content-Description: This is a digitally signed message part -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.2 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQA/QRU3b2iPiv4Uz4cRAnFYAJwJa1USCJwpzuJkoVl6bn7I2/31MwCglfHg kFs7S9QNzZwzq4rYIll+Xxw= =jG1k -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --=-ex7W6s0VXkUmcun888Ef--