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Author: jgh
Date: Mon Oct  5 21:45:11 2015
New Revision: 47513
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47513

Log:
  - cleanup wording in developer's handbook
  
  PR:		203441 (based on)
  Submitted by:	egreaves3@gmail.com
  Approved by:	bcr@ (mentor)
  Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D3821

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/tools/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/tools/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/tools/chapter.xml	Mon Oct  5 14:48:03 2015	(r47512)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/tools/chapter.xml	Mon Oct  5 21:45:11 2015	(r47513)
@@ -221,9 +221,8 @@
 	    <para>Logo is a language that is easy to learn, and has
 	      been used as an introductory programming language in
 	      various courses.  It is an excellent tool to work with
-	      when teaching programming in small ages, as it makes the
-	      creation of elaborate geometric shapes an easy task even
-	      for very small children.</para>
+	      when teaching programming to smaller age groups, as it makes
+	      creation of elaborate geometric shapes an easy task.</para>
 
 	    <para>The latest version of Logo for &os; is available from
 	      the Ports Collection in