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Date: Mon, 7 Apr 2003 19:31:13 -0700 (PDT)
From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org>
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Subject: Re: docs/40313: Grammar, wording, and clarifications for
	handbook/security/chapter.sgml
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Synopsis: Grammar, wording, and clarifications for handbook/security/chapter.sgml

State-Changed-From-To: open->closed
State-Changed-By: murray
State-Changed-When: Mon Apr 7 19:29:43 PDT 2003
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I committed many of the changes in this patch, found some others, and
left a few of your changes uncommitted since I don't agree with them.
This chapter needs a lot more work.  Your patch here was very much
appreciated.


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