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Date:      Tue, 3 Apr 2007 16:31:26 +0300
From:      Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org>
To:        Ganbold <ganbold@micom.mng.net>
Cc:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, cvs-doc@freebsd.org, cvs-all@freebsd.org
Subject:   Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook Makefile book.sgml chapters.ent doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails chapter.sgml
Message-ID:  <20070403133126.GA36881@kobe.laptop>
In-Reply-To: <46034FFC.60001@micom.mng.net>
References:  <200703222030.l2MKUJjp012740@repoman.freebsd.org> <46034FFC.60001@micom.mng.net>

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On 2007-03-23 11:56, Ganbold <ganbold@micom.mng.net> wrote:
> >  Revision  Changes    Path
> >  1.101     +1 -0      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/Makefile
> >  1.170     +2 -0      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml
> >  1.36      +1 -0      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/chapters.ent
> >  1.1       +463 -0    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.sgml (new)
>  
> Thanks for the great new chapter (one more chapter is added to my
> translation work :().
> 
> The following sentence seems to be missing parentheses.
> 
>      <para>Attach to a running jail, from its host system, and run
>        a command inside the jail administrative tasks inside the
>        jail itself).
> 
> It could be:
> 
>      <para>Attach to a running jail, from its host system, and run
>        a command inside the jail (administrative tasks inside the
>        jail itself).

Fixed now.  Thanks once again, Ganbold :-)




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