From owner-freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Sat Jun 30 18:12:59 2018 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E930FFD31F2 for ; Sat, 30 Jun 2018 18:12:58 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from pipatron@gmail.com) Received: from mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (mailman.ysv.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::50:5]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7F1ED86AB1 for ; Sat, 30 Jun 2018 18:12:58 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from pipatron@gmail.com) Received: by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) id 3393CFD31F0; Sat, 30 Jun 2018 18:12:58 +0000 (UTC) Delivered-To: doc@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 208BAFD31EF for ; Sat, 30 Jun 2018 18:12:58 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from pipatron@gmail.com) Received: from mail-io0-x22a.google.com (mail-io0-x22a.google.com [IPv6:2607:f8b0:4001:c06::22a]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (Client CN "smtp.gmail.com", Issuer "Google Internet Authority G2" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id AE9ED86AB0 for ; Sat, 30 Jun 2018 18:12:57 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from pipatron@gmail.com) Received: by mail-io0-x22a.google.com with SMTP id q9-v6so555529ioj.8 for ; Sat, 30 Jun 2018 11:12:57 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20161025; h=mime-version:from:date:message-id:subject:to :content-transfer-encoding; bh=UBt9hLkZXop22OojFJedtBzfFYU9qqrKZs4UdbY9Ruo=; b=hKAHx52fSm0/EPvEbEPzuZaOgLJLa6niQB5ctfnk6Wkpz1BiXBelppKq/S01nHLosA aQrvTCnnb2UvyodD+zedM8duVMX+rGaxhyQrPehMvDEQEVzoWz0Yc50rj70FD4DL2nqp tReibWzhLtTafgr4904c1LBaQiGBtQiG0YsbxJ0qXORUTQUhhUuCyBKSUFPXwqQ5ewJc zkZsyyDA1RjqIHQaiYfz7fgKLwymetlEO0b7UuSfQxOnyxRLA2JNFORFCc1P8mZAq+Gv 1m/pjuxs3UcQLC+ak0wTXjm6fi4LyUluJEtlAvMiOFpZpzWpenvEQpWott0Sn2jRr4Iu TO3A== X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20161025; h=x-gm-message-state:mime-version:from:date:message-id:subject:to :content-transfer-encoding; bh=UBt9hLkZXop22OojFJedtBzfFYU9qqrKZs4UdbY9Ruo=; b=IeUwlL0TpFCfD39tytKq/mXY51VTuzB2pJlaplapFuuGcAUFZ3/XGF5sYYz19fQoPQ BormGdvtnbHs0h5yRobbRuel1qOK7EHab8FUtFCyhwe9veIsQR1kZA6g74F7bBSQvHPh VgfNIt7n0rr7EAYSywGHSNcvsVrdOeRo+OLEGPHRk8cVTk/+P5UkOOzciqHXT4VUivkx XJgrl22gG9e9ThjC8YiWNvn/enAY8QY7gFg3YPBEsO+K2wyHBXyqO+4ph1LmNyEbJ9Po vnjmGo2OOr9u0w6sRhajP7p6TuQHjaysnNtkdNBx55dIkb+oMiDqNQZ+MR6K8dItNZmP b4Iw== X-Gm-Message-State: APt69E14Cm6k/aU5B4UpGoqv/Ki4K+/qh0ZR40W232InwaAJzw2VVfB0 olirduH81gHYgLnig425a8wh+n6WJ3XnouNzZ4apmg== X-Google-Smtp-Source: AAOMgpdIsg0qbGpRijMVRWR6iqA7yn7CO0ppkxBe/5A4hIJ1DwXXZc0wGzBodPpPj3NBFcHv/ra+pe7wuVnzU8yVPos= X-Received: by 2002:a6b:6503:: with SMTP id z3-v6mr8851970iob.129.1530382377146; Sat, 30 Jun 2018 11:12:57 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 Received: by 2002:a02:3504:0:0:0:0:0 with HTTP; Sat, 30 Jun 2018 11:12:16 -0700 (PDT) From: Anders Andersson Date: Sat, 30 Jun 2018 20:12:16 +0200 Message-ID: Subject: Issues with FreeBSD 11.2-RELEASE Release Notes To: doc@freebsd.org Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.27 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 30 Jun 2018 18:12:59 -0000 Hi! I just received the FreeBSD 11.2-RELEASE Release Notes (https://www.freebsd.org/releases/11.2R/relnotes.html) and noticed two issues with the "Trademark" preamble: > IBM, AIX, OS/2, PowerPC, PS/2, S/390, and ThinkPad are trademarks of Inte= rnational Business Machines Corporation in the United States, other countri= es, or both. ThinkPad is not a trademark of IBM. >Many of the designations used by manufacturers and sellers to distinguish = their products are claimed as trademarks. Where those designations appear i= n this document, and the FreeBSD Project was aware of the trademark claim, = the designations have been followed by the =E2=80=9C=E2=84=A2=E2=80=9D or t= he =E2=80=9C=C2=AE=E2=80=9D symbol. I'm not sure if this is actually followed in the rest of the documentation, but =C2=AE and =E2=84=A2 are really only supposed to be used= by the owner of those trademarks - they are the ones to claim the ownership. AFAIK, the only special handling given to a trademark is to treat it like a proper name, so "I installed Windows" instead of "I installed windows". IANAL but I suggest that you remove pretty much everything of that legal preamble, perhaps only saving "FreeBSD is a registered trademark of the FreeBSD Foundation.". Kind regards, Anders