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From: Warren Block
Date: Fri, 16 Dec 2016 23:28:17 +0000 (UTC)
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Subject: svn commit: r49744 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/platforms
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Author: wblock
Date: Fri Dec 16 23:28:17 2016
New Revision: 49744
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/49744
Log:
Cleanup from linimon's patch along with some improvenating of
Englishification.
PR: 213060
Submitted by: linimon
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/platforms/sparc.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/platforms/sparc.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/platforms/sparc.xml Fri Dec 16 22:29:39 2016 (r49743)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/platforms/sparc.xml Fri Dec 16 23:28:17 2016 (r49744)
@@ -39,12 +39,12 @@
Tier 2 architecture, and as such is not fully supported by the
FreeBSD project. Although fully functional, the port
- is not as mature as the existing i386 or amd64 ports.
+ is not as feature-complete as the i386 or amd64 ports.
A summary of supported systems follows. SMP is supported on all supported
- systems that contain more than 1 processor. For full details please see
+ systems that contain more than 1 processor. For full details, please see
the
hardware notes of the
@@ -87,8 +87,8 @@
Sun Ultra 450
- The following systems are partially supported by FreeBSD. In
- particular the fibre channel controllers in SBus-based systems are not
+
These systems are partially supported by FreeBSD. In particular,
+ the fibre channel controllers in SBus-based systems are not
supported. However, it is possible to use these with a SCSI controller
supported by the esp(4) driver (Sun ESP SCSI, Sun FAS Fast-SCSI
and Sun FAS366 Fast-Wide SCSI controllers).
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@
Starting with 7.2-RELEASE, sparc64 systems based on
Sun UltraSPARC III and beyond are also supported by FreeBSD, which includes
- the following known working systems:
+ these known working systems:
- Sun Blade 1000
@@ -124,8 +124,8 @@
- Sun Netra 20/Netra T4
- The following Sun UltraSPARC systems are not tested but
- believed to be also supported by FreeBSD:
+ These Sun UltraSPARC systems are not tested but are
+ believed to also be supported by FreeBSD:
- Sun Fire V125
@@ -134,15 +134,15 @@
Starting with 7.4-RELEASE and 8.1-RELEASE, sparc64 systems based on Fujitsu SPARC64 V
- are also supported by FreeBSD, which includes the following
+ are also supported by FreeBSD, which includes these
known working systems:
- The following Fujitsu SPARC64 systems are not tested but believed to be
- also supported by FreeBSD:
+ These Fujitsu SPARC64 systems have not been tested but are believed to
+ also be supported by FreeBSD:
- Fujitsu PRIMEPOWER 450
@@ -150,20 +150,9 @@
- Fujitsu PRIMEPOWER 850
- If you have a system that is not listed here please try it, and let
+
If you have a system that is not listed here, please try it and let
us know about it.
-
-
- The following people have been working either in the spotlights or behind
- the scenes to get the FreeBSD port off the ground:
-
-
- - &a.jake.email;
- - &a.tmm.email;
- - &a.obrien.email;
-
-
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