From nobody Sun Dec 4 11:33:05 2022 X-Original-To: doc@mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4NQ4LB0tP7z4hxcP for ; Sun, 4 Dec 2022 11:33:06 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:3]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256 client-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-digest SHA256) (Client CN "mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org", Issuer "R3" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4NQ4L96t36z3rmS for ; Sun, 4 Dec 2022 11:33:05 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=freebsd.org; s=dkim; t=1670153586; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding: in-reply-to:in-reply-to:references:references; bh=PWNTfnoG80USnJa1X35vlOko0QEflWZbQ4K7ywlNsvQ=; b=qOkXsFMLZgYnDC2fWcTTL2kS9PEtaeYyoBhDhofQw1KiZEWukEjlKw7FguWPVtIJGl8n8i pCpEmMdHo4zBy42PUTP1UMStQWqp/vHUNb3TOrXXBx61YWhABjPifDKYR2XIuMy07f84OR qKGS9+8NCS79hZc5umEFQDRP/ttOxFs2RsF8yrkMpoVr9vi/bWe+YcsNTCSSVI+6xIB140 xAOn60FMFX1IxU7s39BISVeDGjmaD3PyKYFVsmegK7W4kbgZTH/3E7/k4G5x+JhGYQ+lK4 +o6D3PERMjzGOxS6rMmYthrgIV1bFpmgAQf+rdSapeicBw3x49Vsxz+BuUaBVg== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; mx1.freebsd.org; none ARC-Seal: i=1; s=dkim; d=freebsd.org; t=1670153586; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; b=DgbRAK3utfXbUh9kWMFCmIyk3CcV9HAL2k/rrtem/jP+0DGdDet4tQtfirZyioh7AntC5L 1y94rY0w6OzHlFHjDFGqHOdydjFaJq/rW4qZpfQ6x+4Emc642qOoZzB2BGamouhDrFZBik 2Ccxq5qNzntnhsjx7gVm1y9rJgjVyjjZ0po289w4dHgAjKPpsCIZJwEUwFtM2b3h/7BjfR 0I08qbp4mhDQs3iKHXUM3XK4JNbAtbMBmY69R/vulIIYKemdjcxZRZqqT6kGex00I7eask 99z74ZRXb5zd0MkyHwWlN1ytjJB4bZKjko5YFFPAJzWveeWCHTIo1+1UPnBbxQ== Received: from kenobi.freebsd.org (kenobi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::50:1d]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256) (Client did not present a certificate) by mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4NQ4L95yP6zHXj for ; Sun, 4 Dec 2022 11:33:05 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from kenobi.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.5]) by kenobi.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id 2B4BX5JM007891 for ; Sun, 4 Dec 2022 11:33:05 GMT (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: (from www@localhost) by kenobi.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id 2B4BX5KD007889 for doc@FreeBSD.org; Sun, 4 Dec 2022 11:33:05 GMT (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) X-Authentication-Warning: kenobi.freebsd.org: www set sender to bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org using -f From: bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org To: doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: [Bug 266111] FAQ: minor corrections and improvements, and notes ahead of a holistic rewrite Date: Sun, 04 Dec 2022 11:33:05 +0000 X-Bugzilla-Reason: CC X-Bugzilla-Type: changed X-Bugzilla-Watch-Reason: None X-Bugzilla-Product: Documentation X-Bugzilla-Component: Books & Articles X-Bugzilla-Version: Latest X-Bugzilla-Keywords: X-Bugzilla-Severity: Affects Some People X-Bugzilla-Who: grahamperrin@freebsd.org X-Bugzilla-Status: In Progress X-Bugzilla-Resolution: X-Bugzilla-Priority: --- X-Bugzilla-Assigned-To: grahamperrin@freebsd.org X-Bugzilla-Flags: X-Bugzilla-Changed-Fields: short_desc see_also Message-ID: In-Reply-To: References: Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Bugzilla-URL: https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/ Auto-Submitted: auto-generated List-Id: Documentation project List-Archive: https://lists.freebsd.org/archives/freebsd-doc List-Help: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@freebsd.org MIME-Version: 1.0 X-ThisMailContainsUnwantedMimeParts: N https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=3D266111 Graham Perrin changed: What |Removed |Added ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Summary|FAQ: minor corrections and |FAQ: minor corrections and |improvements |improvements, and notes | |ahead of a holistic rewrite See Also| |https://bugs.freebsd.org/bu | |gzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=3D2= 652 | |76, | |https://reviews.freebsd.org | |/D37598 --- Comment #5 from Graham Perrin --- Think of D37598 as tidiness. Consider the possibility of someone wanting to reuse a part, elsewhere, before or after retirement of the existing FAQ.=20 ---- Re: comment #1 and comment #2 Whilst the holistic side of things takes shape =E2=80=93 for a new FAQ page= =E2=80=93 below, a couple of brief notes (other brief notes may follow).=20 1) Missing keywords include:=20 * releng 2) is redundant and disorienting. The paragraph directs readers _away_ from the documentation portal, to a FreeBSD Project page that misuses books (alone) as a link for documentation (in general).=20 Instead, we already have:=20 * Books =E2=80=93 in the Documentation menu. --=20 You are receiving this mail because: You are on the CC list for the bug.=