Date: Sun, 13 Oct 2013 16:01:28 +0100 (BST) From: Gavin Atkinson <gavin@FreeBSD.org> To: Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com> Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r42948 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers Message-ID: <alpine.BSF.2.00.1310131557370.79845@thunderhorn.york.ac.uk> In-Reply-To: <alpine.BSF.2.00.1310130840190.78122@wonkity.com> References: <201310131144.r9DBiIOI015785@svn.freebsd.org> <alpine.BSF.2.00.1310130840190.78122@wonkity.com>
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On Sun, 13 Oct 2013, Warren Block wrote: > On Sun, 13 Oct 2013, Gavin Atkinson wrote: > > > Author: gavin > > Date: Sun Oct 13 11:44:18 2013 > > New Revision: 42948 > > URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42948 > > > > Log: > > Replace UTF-8 'RIGHT SINGLE QUOTATION MARK' (U+2019), encoded as > > 0xE2 0x80 0x99, with a standard apostrophe. It's not clear to me why > > this was brealing the build on the cluster and seemingly nowhere else, but > > this should at least allow the build there to complete. > > > > Modified: > > head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml > > > > Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml > > ============================================================================== > > --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml Sun > > Oct 13 03:19:30 2013 (r42947) > > +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml Sun > > Oct 13 11:44:18 2013 (r42948) > > @@ -6264,7 +6264,7 @@ target iqn.2012-06.com.example:target0 { > > allowed.</para> > > > > <para>Second entry defines a single target. Target has two > > - meanings - it is a machine serving iSCSI, but it?s also > > + meanings - it is a machine serving iSCSI, but it's also > > a named group of LUNs. In this example, we use the latter > > meaning. The "iqn.2012-06.com.example:target0" is the > > target name. For testing purposes it might be left as it > > Contractions are a style guide problem anyway. "it's" should be expanded or > even removed. Absolutely - this commit was purely to get the docbuilds on the cluster working again. I have no time to do more than that today. Gavin > "Second entry defines a single target." is missing an article, or possibly > better rearranged as "A single target is defined by the second entry." > > The word "target" in the second sentence could use <quote> or <emphasis> tags > to point out that it is talking about the use of the word in the first > sentence. >
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