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Date:      Sat, 17 Mar 2012 10:09:13 -0400
From:      Eitan Adler <eadler@freebsd.org>
To:        Gavin Atkinson <gavin@freebsd.org>
Cc:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, cvs-doc@freebsd.org, cvs-all@freebsd.org
Subject:   Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/mac chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/pccard chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/dev-model book.sgml doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking chapter.sgml doc
Message-ID:  <CAF6rxgk-Kf8oyPE6tn-pnsFTsB4puXqJx0tUGzM7VqA%2BAykRQA@mail.gmail.com>

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On Sat, Mar 17, 2012 at 8:09 AM, Gavin Atkinson <gavin@freebsd.org> wrote:
>> =C2=A0 1.13 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0+1 -1 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0doc/en_US.ISO8=
859-1/books/arch-handbook/pccard/chapter.sgml
>
> This was an intentional use of "that that", and your change alters the
> meaning of the sentence.

I dislike the construction 'that that'. Perhaps the wording should be
"NULL entries mean that the corresponding part of entry..."? Can you
propose different text that works better?

--=20
Eitan Adler
Source & Ports committer
X11, Bugbusting teams



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