Date: Wed, 20 Jun 2012 06:10:16 +0000 (UTC) From: Sergey Kandaurov <pluknet@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r39068 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook Message-ID: <201206200610.q5K6AGcQ022819@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: pluknet Date: Wed Jun 20 06:10:16 2012 New Revision: 39068 URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/39068 Log: Minor grammar, clarity fixes in entries 900505, 1000006, 1000007 of the __FreeBSD_version values table: o fix a typo in 'and' o add the serial comma to promote clarity o remove a spurious comma from the end of a sentense Reviewed by: Isabell Long (the Oxford comma) Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml Wed Jun 20 02:28:11 2012 (r39067) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml Wed Jun 20 06:10:16 2012 (r39068) @@ -15301,7 +15301,7 @@ Reference: <http://www.freebsd.org/po <entry>March 13, 2012</entry> <entry>9.0-STABLE after introduction of new tcp(4) socket options: TCP_KEEPINIT, TCP_KEEPIDLE, - TCP_KEEPINTVL anf TCP_KEEPCNT, (rev + TCP_KEEPINTVL, and TCP_KEEPCNT (rev <svnref>232945</svnref>).</entry> </row> @@ -15359,7 +15359,7 @@ Reference: <http://www.freebsd.org/po <entry>1000006</entry> <entry>January 26, 2012</entry> <entry>10-CURRENT after introduction of read capacity - data asynchronous notification in the cam(4) layer, + data asynchronous notification in the cam(4) layer (rev <svnref>230590</svnref>).</entry> </row> @@ -15368,7 +15368,7 @@ Reference: <http://www.freebsd.org/po <entry>February 5, 2012</entry> <entry>10-CURRENT after introduction of new tcp(4) socket options: TCP_KEEPINIT, TCP_KEEPIDLE, - TCP_KEEPINTVL anf TCP_KEEPCNT, (rev + TCP_KEEPINTVL, and TCP_KEEPCNT (rev <svnref>231025</svnref>).</entry> </row>
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