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From: Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net>
To: Xin LI <delphij@FreeBSD.org>
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Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/audit
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On Sat, Aug 13, 2005 at 10:26:04AM +0000, Xin LI wrote:
> delphij     2005-08-13 10:26:04 UTC
>=20
>   FreeBSD doc repository
>=20
>   Modified files:
>     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/audit chapter.sgml=20
>   Log:
>    - cron(8) would read the /etc/crontab once it was changed, so mention
>      this.

> | @@ -523,8 +523,8 @@ audit:fc:no</programlisting>
> | =20
> |        <programlisting>*     */12       *       *       *       root   =
 /usr/sbin/audit -n</programlisting>
> | =20
> | -      <para>Remember to reinstall the <filename>crontab</filename>
> | -        file.  Otherwise the rotation will never occur.</para>
> | +      <para>The change will take effect once you have saved the
> | +	<filename>/etc/crontab</filename>.</para>

I would prefer either of

  "The change will take effect once you have saved the
   new /etc/crontab"

  "The change will take effect one you have saved
   /etc/crontab"

Ceri
--=20
Only two things are infinite, the universe and human stupidity, and I'm
not sure about the former.			  -- Einstein (attrib.)

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