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Author: pluknet
Date: Wed Jun 20 06:10:16 2012
New Revision: 39068
URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/39068

Log:
  Minor grammar, clarity fixes in entries 900505, 1000006, 1000007
  of the __FreeBSD_version values table:
  o fix a typo in 'and'
  o add the serial comma to promote clarity
  o remove a spurious comma from the end of a sentense
  
  Reviewed by:	Isabell Long (the Oxford comma)

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml	Wed Jun 20 02:28:11 2012	(r39067)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml	Wed Jun 20 06:10:16 2012	(r39068)
@@ -15301,7 +15301,7 @@ Reference: &lt;http://www.freebsd.org/po
 	      <entry>March 13, 2012</entry>
 	      <entry>9.0-STABLE after introduction of new tcp(4)
 		socket options: TCP_KEEPINIT, TCP_KEEPIDLE,
-		TCP_KEEPINTVL anf TCP_KEEPCNT, (rev
+		TCP_KEEPINTVL, and TCP_KEEPCNT (rev
 		<svnref>232945</svnref>).</entry>
 	    </row>
 
@@ -15359,7 +15359,7 @@ Reference: &lt;http://www.freebsd.org/po
 	      <entry>1000006</entry>
 	      <entry>January 26, 2012</entry>
 	      <entry>10-CURRENT after introduction of read capacity
-		data asynchronous notification in the cam(4) layer,
+		data asynchronous notification in the cam(4) layer
 		(rev <svnref>230590</svnref>).</entry>
 	    </row>
 
@@ -15368,7 +15368,7 @@ Reference: &lt;http://www.freebsd.org/po
 	      <entry>February 5, 2012</entry>
 	      <entry>10-CURRENT after introduction of new tcp(4)
 		socket options: TCP_KEEPINIT, TCP_KEEPIDLE,
-		TCP_KEEPINTVL anf TCP_KEEPCNT, (rev
+		TCP_KEEPINTVL, and TCP_KEEPCNT (rev
 		<svnref>231025</svnref>).</entry>
 	    </row>