From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Mar 18 23:21:07 2015 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher AECDH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id DFB61B2E; Wed, 18 Mar 2015 23:21:07 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id CA489CCD; Wed, 18 Mar 2015 23:21:07 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.9/8.14.9) with ESMTP id t2INL7n9054886; Wed, 18 Mar 2015 23:21:07 GMT (envelope-from allanjude@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from allanjude@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.9/8.14.9/Submit) id t2INL7NL054885; Wed, 18 Mar 2015 23:21:07 GMT (envelope-from allanjude@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201503182321.t2INL7NL054885@svn.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: svn.freebsd.org: allanjude set sender to allanjude@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Allan Jude Date: Wed, 18 Mar 2015 23:21:07 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r46355 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.18-1 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 18 Mar 2015 23:21:08 -0000 Author: allanjude Date: Wed Mar 18 23:21:06 2015 New Revision: 46355 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/46355 Log: Fixup typo and improve grammar in ZFS chapter of handbook PR: 197804 Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D1213 Submitted by: Mike M (original) Approved by: wblock (mentor) Sponsored by: ScaleEngine Inc. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml Wed Mar 18 22:36:22 2015 (r46354) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml Wed Mar 18 23:21:06 2015 (r46355) @@ -1278,9 +1278,10 @@ errors: No known data errors resilver operation, the pool can grow to use the capacity of the new device. For example, consider a mirror of a 1 TB drive and a - 2 drive. The usable space is 1 TB. Then the - 1 TB is replaced with another 2 TB drive, and the - resilvering process duplicates existing data. Because + 2 TB drive. The usable space is 1 TB. When the + 1 TB drive is replaced with another 2 TB drive, the + resilvering process copies the existing data onto the new + drive. Because both of the devices now have 2 TB capacity, the mirror's available space can be grown to 2 TB.