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Date:      Sun, 30 Jun 2013 18:32:38 -0400 (EDT)
From:      Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU>
To:        Warren Block <wblock@freebsd.org>
Cc:        svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org
Subject:   Re: svn commit: r42089 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide
Message-ID:  <alpine.GSO.1.10.1306301831430.26275@multics.mit.edu>
In-Reply-To: <201306300152.r5U1q7sC096550@svn.freebsd.org>
References:  <201306300152.r5U1q7sC096550@svn.freebsd.org>

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On Sun, 30 Jun 2013, Warren Block wrote:

> Author: wblock
> Date: Sun Jun 30 01:52:06 2013
> New Revision: 42089
> URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42089
>
> Log:
>  Content updates: replace FreeBSD with &os; where appropriate, rewrite a
>  stilted paragraph on SSH.
>
> Modified:
>  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml
>
> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml
> ==============================================================================
> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml	Sun Jun 30 01:37:37 2013	(r42088)
> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml	Sun Jun 30 01:52:06 2013	(r42089)
> @@ -149,27 +149,26 @@
>       </tgroup>
>     </informaltable>
>
> -    <para>It is required that you use &man.ssh.1; to connect to the
> -      project hosts.  If you do not know anything about &man.ssh.1;,
> -      please see <xref linkend="ssh.guide"/>.</para>
> +    <para>&man.ssh.1; is required to connect to the projecte hosts.

Spurious 'e' ("projecte")?

-Ben

> +      For more information, see <xref linkend="ssh.guide"/>.</para>
>
>     <para>Useful links:</para>



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