From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jun 30 22:37:50 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id C120EA17; Sun, 30 Jun 2013 22:37:50 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@mit.edu) Received: from dmz-mailsec-scanner-8.mit.edu (dmz-mailsec-scanner-8.mit.edu [18.7.68.37]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2FE951E4A; Sun, 30 Jun 2013 22:37:49 +0000 (UTC) X-AuditID: 12074425-b7f0c8e000000953-e4-51d0b20a3ae7 Received: from mailhub-auth-2.mit.edu ( [18.7.62.36]) by dmz-mailsec-scanner-8.mit.edu (Symantec Messaging Gateway) with SMTP id B1.02.02387.A02B0D15; Sun, 30 Jun 2013 18:32:43 -0400 (EDT) Received: from outgoing.mit.edu (outgoing-auth-1.mit.edu [18.9.28.11]) by mailhub-auth-2.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.9.2) with ESMTP id r5UMWgmj006204; Sun, 30 Jun 2013 18:32:42 -0400 Received: from multics.mit.edu (system-low-sipb.mit.edu [18.187.2.37]) (authenticated bits=56) (User authenticated as kaduk@ATHENA.MIT.EDU) by outgoing.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.12.4) with ESMTP id r5UMWdSQ024559 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT); Sun, 30 Jun 2013 18:32:41 -0400 Received: (from kaduk@localhost) by multics.mit.edu (8.12.9.20060308) id r5UMWcLp008569; Sun, 30 Jun 2013 18:32:38 -0400 (EDT) Date: Sun, 30 Jun 2013 18:32:38 -0400 (EDT) From: Benjamin Kaduk To: Warren Block Subject: Re: svn commit: r42089 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide In-Reply-To: <201306300152.r5U1q7sC096550@svn.freebsd.org> Message-ID: References: <201306300152.r5U1q7sC096550@svn.freebsd.org> User-Agent: Alpine 1.10 (GSO 962 2008-03-14) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=US-ASCII; format=flowed X-Brightmail-Tracker: H4sIAAAAAAAAA+NgFvrIIsWRmVeSWpSXmKPExsUixG6nosu96UKgwZzZTBY/Ph5isrixaD+T xe7+XmaLy+8nsjiweMz4NJ8lgDGKyyYlNSezLLVI3y6BK+P00t3MBUc4KzZs3MTSwPiKvYuR g0NCwETi9rHILkZOIFNM4sK99WxdjFwcQgL7GCV+vVzHAuFsZJQ4vvMDO4RziEli+aKnUJkG RokzpxaxgvSzCGhLzJmyiRHEZhNQkZj5ZiMbiC0ioCrxvXsVE4jNLBAlsWdpIyvIamGBIImW E0IgYU4BK4nX926ClfAKOEqs7TzODmILCVhKbJ/YBzZSVEBHYvX+KSwQNYISJ2c+YYEYaSlx 7s91tgmMgrOQpGYhSS1gZFrFKJuSW6Wbm5iZU5yarFucnJiXl1qka6GXm1mil5pSuokRHLIu qjsYJxxSOsQowMGoxMO7YPqFQCHWxLLiytxDjJIcTEqivDHrgEJ8SfkplRmJxRnxRaU5qcWH GCU4mJVEeLd/Ph8oxJuSWFmVWpQPk5LmYFES533+9GygkEB6YklqdmpqQWoRTFaGg0NJgtdk I9BQwaLU9NSKtMycEoQ0EwcnyHAeoOGLNwDV8BYXJOYWZ6ZD5E8xKkqJ81qANAuAJDJK8+B6 YSnlFaM40CvCvPIgVTzAdATX/QpoMBPQYN7WcyCDSxIRUlINjNmbY3jOvp/+tCJISk8wZHvH pA+sYv7rfkVxbOp9nuS529ravHLH81WGs5rTZhi/fXOhInHp/2kijDqL+3g+BLv+q43U297x ofPVkQ5DyUNdZ9nWKTv/VZa8dU9W3zEl4pRu7GHTuEcP7z9j373K4ZlFhY5hr5nY4aepE351 3lvl7+p9aebdb0osxRmJhlrMRcWJABQq2zQEAwAA Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 30 Jun 2013 22:37:50 -0000 On Sun, 30 Jun 2013, Warren Block wrote: > Author: wblock > Date: Sun Jun 30 01:52:06 2013 > New Revision: 42089 > URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42089 > > Log: > Content updates: replace FreeBSD with &os; where appropriate, rewrite a > stilted paragraph on SSH. > > Modified: > head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml > > Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml > ============================================================================== > --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml Sun Jun 30 01:37:37 2013 (r42088) > +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml Sun Jun 30 01:52:06 2013 (r42089) > @@ -149,27 +149,26 @@ > > > > - It is required that you use &man.ssh.1; to connect to the > - project hosts. If you do not know anything about &man.ssh.1;, > - please see . > + &man.ssh.1; is required to connect to the projecte hosts. Spurious 'e' ("projecte")? -Ben > + For more information, see . > > Useful links: