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From: "Gary W. Swearingen" <garys@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Sep 2005 18:23:09 +0000 (UTC)
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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom chapter.sgml
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garys       2005-09-13 18:23:09 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  Inserted a missing parenthesis, hyphen, comma, an "a", a "the", and
  --  Removed "for" from "caused for the system".
  --  Changed "filesystem" to "file system".
  --  Changed "base base" to "base".
  --  Replaced a comma with a semicolon.
  --  Changed "We skip using" to "We avoid using".
  --  Changed ", i.e.:" to "; i.e.,".
  --  Down-cased "In" at the start of a sentence fragment.
  
  Approved by:    keramida
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.10      +12 -12    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.sgml