From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Nov 2 22:26:24 2008 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6E9AC106567C for ; Sun, 2 Nov 2008 22:26:24 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from eitanadlerlist@gmail.com) Received: from rv-out-0506.google.com (rv-out-0506.google.com [209.85.198.229]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3AD988FC17 for ; Sun, 2 Nov 2008 22:26:24 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from eitanadlerlist@gmail.com) Received: by rv-out-0506.google.com with SMTP id b25so2090611rvf.43 for ; Sun, 02 Nov 2008 14:26:23 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:message-id:date:user-agent :mime-version:to:subject:x-enigmail-version:openpgp:content-type :from; bh=5Ot9bongGQxnI/L52N6gb+jG7tJdR1QXXd83yynalt4=; b=EYwN09e8rzmtaPgcN4T60o0yXLdhAWH7ZqRXN/M7cuXp5WbZo/oX+I7IXjr3cBTFVl 73VRjULeXBMnF50/dvgmAnnGPbYUlNCIugNarBjZb1remQoAcLoniyTClDK9gkE90Wg8 drJEa6Tm7SkDZzzJJCbFfr81TV+OES8NhtedI= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=message-id:date:user-agent:mime-version:to:subject :x-enigmail-version:openpgp:content-type:from; b=rgaOC7u1b81Tzc+pefn5oE8grAfMzGtVZ4NxZxdOOOHUdhAX4Nj7Cd5BFKEv2GbBh1 DARRdMIhrOr+UGee3WB0pFgRr9446v0W9I/OvE6A31+dwf89qTVOaJaXtFI2nk+W83Bq 8JqAAjxQVqVwTFCDzf0Oxvh4TRhzxwT5e6geo= Received: by 10.115.111.1 with SMTP id o1mr12220796wam.114.1225664783659; Sun, 02 Nov 2008 14:26:23 -0800 (PST) Received: from ?192.168.1.101? (ool-182d26f3.dyn.optonline.net [24.45.38.243]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id n22sm12169854pof.18.2008.11.02.14.26.17 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=RC4-MD5); Sun, 02 Nov 2008 14:26:22 -0800 (PST) Message-ID: <490E2907.5090907@gmail.com> Date: Sun, 02 Nov 2008 17:26:15 -0500 User-Agent: Mozilla (X11; U; FreeBSD i386; en-US; ) Gecko Thunderbird Mnenhy/0.7.5.666 MIME-Version: 1.0 To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Enigmail-Version: 0.95.7 OpenPGP: id=E9C2CCD1; url=pgp.mit.edu Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="------------070401000904080509010206" From: Eitan Adler Subject: change to sgml-primer example X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 02 Nov 2008 22:26:24 -0000 This is a multi-part message in MIME format. --------------070401000904080509010206 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit -----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA1 Can anyone comment on the attached patch to be run from /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-primer - -- GNU Key fingerptrint: 2E13 BC16 5F54 0FBD 62ED 42B6 B65F 24AB E9C2 CCD1 -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v2.0.9 (FreeBSD) iEYEARECAAYFAkkOKQcACgkQtl8kq+nCzNF6pACfXl362SlqAL1BtgDgP1KuH2V1 LFgAn2++bPmiZq0mBkPUVluAKhRExlrD =/oXj -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --------------070401000904080509010206 Content-Type: text/plain; name="change_sgml_example.udiff.patch" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: inline; filename="change_sgml_example.udiff.patch" --- chapter.sgml 2008-10-31 08:23:35.000000000 -0400 +++ newchapter.sgml 2008-11-02 17:21:54.000000000 -0500 @@ -862,6 +862,7 @@ Erroneous SGML comments + The SGML parser will treat ]]> - The SGML parser will treat this as though it were actually: + as though it were actually: <!THIS IS OUTSIDE THE COMMENT> This is not valid SGML, and may give confusing error messages. + Because "--" delimitates the end of a comment do do not write comments like this: + ]]> - As the example suggests, do not write - comments like that. + This is a (slightly) better approach, but it still potentially confusing to people new to SGML: ]]> - That is a (slightly) better approach, but it still potentially - confusing to people new to SGML. --------------070401000904080509010206 Content-Type: application/octet-stream; name="change_sgml_example.udiff.patch.sig" Content-Transfer-Encoding: base64 Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="change_sgml_example.udiff.patch.sig" iEYEABECAAYFAkkOKQcACgkQtl8kq+nCzNH/SwCfeyEYCQciCpqWvB9VFdDO9qSbHh4AmgLR krTgvE1H+HmkUyrzqL1gpaUN --------------070401000904080509010206--