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Author: wblock
Date: Sun Oct 14 17:35:16 2012
New Revision: 39752
URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/39752

Log:
  Remove more contractions.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml	Sun Oct 14 17:32:56 2012	(r39751)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml	Sun Oct 14 17:35:16 2012	(r39752)
@@ -1972,7 +1972,7 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done.
 	  <para>Reboot into single user mode.</para>
 
 	  <para>Single user mode minimizes problems from updating
-	    software that's already running.  It also minimizes any
+	    software that is already running.  It also minimizes any
 	    problems from running the old world on a new
 	    kernel.</para>
 	</listitem>
@@ -2852,7 +2852,7 @@ Script done, &hellip;</screen>
 	    <para>it probably is not worth rebuilding the entire
 	      world.  You could just go to the appropriate
 	      sub-directories and <command>make all install</command>,
-	      and that's about it.  But if something major changed,
+	      and that is about it.  But if something major changed,
 	      for example <filename>src/lib/libc/stdlib</filename>
 	      then you should either re-make the world, or at least
 	      those parts of it that are statically linked (as well as
@@ -3207,7 +3207,7 @@ Building everything..
     <para>Then deinstall, rebuild and reinstall the port.  The
       <filename role="package">ports-mgmt/portmaster</filename> and
       <filename role="package">ports-mgmt/portupgrade</filename>
-      utilities can be used to automate this process.  After you've
+      utilities can be used to automate this process.  After you have
       made sure that all ports are rebuilt and do not use the old
       libraries any more, you can delete them using the following
       command:</para>