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Date:      Mon, 12 Nov 2012 15:16:37 -0500 (EST)
From:      Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU>
To:        Eitan Adler <eadler@freebsd.org>
Cc:        svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org
Subject:   Re: svn commit: r39984 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq
Message-ID:  <alpine.GSO.1.10.1211121513210.2164@multics.mit.edu>
In-Reply-To: <201211112229.qABMT8b9009396@svn.freebsd.org>
References:  <201211112229.qABMT8b9009396@svn.freebsd.org>

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On Sun, 11 Nov 2012, Eitan Adler wrote:

> Author: eadler
> Date: Sun Nov 11 22:29:07 2012
> New Revision: 39984
> URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/39984
>
> Log:
>  Fix stragling paras, and other minor whitespace issues
>
>  Translators may ignore.
>
>  Approved by:	jkois (mentor, prior to merge conflict resolution)
>
> Modified:
>  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
>
> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
> ==============================================================================
> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Sun Nov 11 22:29:05 2012	(r39983)
> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Sun Nov 11 22:29:07 2012	(r39984)
> @@ -6279,8 +6243,7 @@ options    SYSVMSG          # enable for
> 	    do so you will need to unset the <literal>schg</literal> flag
> 	    first.  See the &man.chflags.1; manual page for more information
> 	    (and bear in mind the answer to <link linkend="unsetting-schg">
> -	    the question on unsetting the schg flag</link>).
> -	  </para>
> +	      the question on unsetting the schg flag</link>).</para>

This seems to introduce a whitespace issue, as the indentation is no 
longer consistent with the rest of the paragraph.  pine doesn't make clear 
which is using tabs (if either), so I can't say offhand whether the whole 
paragraph should be reindented or this line fixed.

> 	</answer>
>       </qandaentry>
>     </qandaset>
> @@ -6504,8 +6467,7 @@ EndSection</programlisting>
> 	    waiting for you on the second <quote>virtual
> 	    console</quote>!  When you want to go back to the original
> 	    session, do <keycombo
> -	      action="simul"><keycap>Alt</keycap><keycap>F1</keycap></keycombo>.
> -	    </para>
> +	      action="simul"><keycap>Alt</keycap><keycap>F1</keycap></keycombo>.</para>
>

This line is also inconsistent with the surrounding paragraph, even though 
the leading whitespace seems unchanged in this commit.

> 	  <para>The default &os; installation has eight virtual consoles
> 	    enabled.  <keycombo

Possibly there are others thad are hidden by line-wrapping.

-Ben Kaduk



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