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Subject: Re: svn commit: r363598 - head/usr.sbin/nologin
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> Author: 0mp (doc,ports committer)
> Date: Mon Jul 27 10:45:47 2020
> New Revision: 363598
> URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/363598
> 
> Log:
>   nologin.8: Improve wording

I disagree that this improves wording.  The norm of action for
"logging" in Unix is to "write to syslog", not "log to syslog".

>   Reported by:	yuripv
>   Reviewed by:	bcr, yuripv
>   MFC after:	3 days
>   Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D25814
> 
> Modified:
>   head/usr.sbin/nologin/nologin.8
> 
> Modified: head/usr.sbin/nologin/nologin.8
> ==============================================================================
> --- head/usr.sbin/nologin/nologin.8	Mon Jul 27 09:10:02 2020	(r363597)
> +++ head/usr.sbin/nologin/nologin.8	Mon Jul 27 10:45:47 2020	(r363598)
> @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ have been disabled.
>  .Pp
>  When executed,
>  .Nm
> -first writes about the login attempt to
> +first logs about the login attempt using
>  .Xr syslog 3
>  and then displays a message that an account is not available.
>  .Pp
> 

-- 
Rod Grimes                                                 rgrimes@freebsd.org