From owner-svn-doc-head@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Nov 18 01:40:10 2014 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [8.8.178.115]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher AECDH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 0F0FF2F7; Tue, 18 Nov 2014 01:40:10 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id EE06C699; Tue, 18 Nov 2014 01:40:09 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.9/8.14.9) with ESMTP id sAI1e94l004502; Tue, 18 Nov 2014 01:40:09 GMT (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from wblock@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.9/8.14.9/Submit) id sAI1e86L004314; Tue, 18 Nov 2014 01:40:08 GMT (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201411180140.sAI1e86L004314@svn.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: svn.freebsd.org: wblock set sender to wblock@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Warren Block Date: Tue, 18 Nov 2014 01:40:08 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r45994 - in head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook: porting-dads quick-porting security upgrading versions X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.18-1 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the doc tree for head List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 18 Nov 2014 01:40:10 -0000 Author: wblock Date: Tue Nov 18 01:40:08 2014 New Revision: 45994 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/45994 Log: Minor edits for clarity and style. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/porting-dads/chapter.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security/chapter.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/upgrading/chapter.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/versions/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/porting-dads/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/porting-dads/chapter.xml Tue Nov 18 01:24:53 2014 (r45993) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/porting-dads/chapter.xml Tue Nov 18 01:40:08 2014 (r45994) @@ -563,7 +563,7 @@ exec %%LOCALBASE%%/bin/java -jar %%DATAD Construct The correct way for a Makefile to - signal that the port can not be installed due to some external + signal that the port cannot be installed due to some external factor (for instance, the user has specified an illegal combination of build options) is to set a non-blank value to IGNORE. This value will be formatted and Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml Tue Nov 18 01:24:53 2014 (r45993) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml Tue Nov 18 01:40:08 2014 (r45994) @@ -362,7 +362,7 @@ lib/X11/oneko/mouse.xpm Add a short description of the program to the Description field of the PR (perhaps a short version of COMMENT), and - don't forget to add oneko.shar as an + do not forget to add oneko.shar as an attachment. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security/chapter.xml Tue Nov 18 01:24:53 2014 (r45993) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security/chapter.xml Tue Nov 18 01:40:08 2014 (r45994) @@ -41,9 +41,9 @@ system often assists attackers to break into other systems that could not be compromised otherwise. Therefore closing a vulnerability alone is not enough: notify the audience - of it in most clear and comprehensive manner, which - will allow to evaluate the danger and take appropriate - actions. + of it in the most clear and comprehensive manner, which + will allow them to evaluate the danger and take appropriate + action. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/upgrading/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/upgrading/chapter.xml Tue Nov 18 01:24:53 2014 (r45993) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/upgrading/chapter.xml Tue Nov 18 01:40:08 2014 (r45994) @@ -337,9 +337,9 @@ This file is used to list moved or removed ports. Each line in the file is made - up of the name of the port, where the port was moved to, when, + up of the name of the port, where the port was moved, when, and why. If the port was removed, the section detailing where - it was moved to can be left blank. Each section must be + it was moved can be left blank. Each section must be separated by the | (pipe) character, like so: Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/versions/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/versions/chapter.xml Tue Nov 18 01:24:53 2014 (r45993) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/versions/chapter.xml Tue Nov 18 01:40:08 2014 (r45994) @@ -5503,7 +5503,7 @@ 1100037 October 6, 2014 11.0-CURRENT after addition of - &man.explicit.bzero.3;. (rev + &man.explicit.bzero.3; (rev 272673).