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([2a02:8109:98c0:1bc0:5e5f:67ff:fef4:ffd8]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id r25sm6591710edy.93.2020.07.27.09.57.33 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256 bits=128/128); Mon, 27 Jul 2020 09:57:34 -0700 (PDT) Subject: Re: svn commit: r363598 - head/usr.sbin/nologin To: rgrimes@freebsd.org Cc: src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-head@freebsd.org References: <202007271641.06RGftS7070235@gndrsh.dnsmgr.net> From: Mateusz Piotrowski <0mp@FreeBSD.org> Message-ID: Date: Mon, 27 Jul 2020 18:57:41 +0200 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; FreeBSD amd64; rv:68.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/68.10.0 MIME-Version: 1.0 In-Reply-To: <202007271641.06RGftS7070235@gndrsh.dnsmgr.net> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Language: en-US X-Rspamd-Queue-Id: 4BFmFX5VCtz44Dy X-Spamd-Bar: - Authentication-Results: mx1.freebsd.org; dkim=none; dmarc=none; spf=pass (mx1.freebsd.org: domain of mpp302@gmail.com designates 209.85.218.43 as permitted sender) smtp.mailfrom=mpp302@gmail.com X-Spamd-Result: default: False [-1.12 / 15.00]; RCVD_TLS_ALL(0.00)[]; RCVD_VIA_SMTP_AUTH(0.00)[]; MID_RHS_MATCH_FROM(0.00)[]; FROM_HAS_DN(0.00)[]; RCPT_COUNT_THREE(0.00)[4]; TO_MATCH_ENVRCPT_ALL(0.00)[]; R_SPF_ALLOW(-0.20)[+ip4:209.85.128.0/17]; MIME_GOOD(-0.10)[text/plain]; TO_DN_NONE(0.00)[]; ARC_NA(0.00)[]; DMARC_NA(0.00)[FreeBSD.org]; NEURAL_HAM_LONG(-0.33)[-0.333]; RCVD_COUNT_THREE(0.00)[3]; NEURAL_HAM_MEDIUM(-0.63)[-0.627]; NEURAL_HAM_SHORT(-0.16)[-0.158]; RCVD_IN_DNSWL_NONE(0.00)[209.85.218.43:from]; FORGED_SENDER(0.30)[0mp@FreeBSD.org,mpp302@gmail.com]; RWL_MAILSPIKE_POSSIBLE(0.00)[209.85.218.43:from]; R_DKIM_NA(0.00)[]; MIME_TRACE(0.00)[0:+]; ASN(0.00)[asn:15169, ipnet:209.85.128.0/17, country:US]; FROM_NEQ_ENVFROM(0.00)[0mp@FreeBSD.org,mpp302@gmail.com]; FREEMAIL_ENVFROM(0.00)[gmail.com] X-BeenThere: svn-src-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.33 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire src tree \(except for " user" and " projects" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 27 Jul 2020 16:57:38 -0000 Hi! On 7/27/20 6:41 PM, Rodney W. Grimes wrote: >> Author: 0mp (doc,ports committer) >> Date: Mon Jul 27 10:45:47 2020 >> New Revision: 363598 >> URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/363598 >> >> Log: >> nologin.8: Improve wording > I disagree that this improves wording. The norm of action for > "logging" in Unix is to "write to syslog", not "log to syslog". Hmm, I agree, but here it is "log using syslog". Have you got any idea how to further improve this sentence? >> Reported by: yuripv >> Reviewed by: bcr, yuripv >> MFC after: 3 days >> Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D25814 >> >> Modified: >> head/usr.sbin/nologin/nologin.8 >> >> Modified: head/usr.sbin/nologin/nologin.8 >> ============================================================================== >> --- head/usr.sbin/nologin/nologin.8 Mon Jul 27 09:10:02 2020 (r363597) >> +++ head/usr.sbin/nologin/nologin.8 Mon Jul 27 10:45:47 2020 (r363598) >> @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ have been disabled. >> .Pp >> When executed, >> .Nm >> -first writes about the login attempt to >> +first logs about the login attempt using >> .Xr syslog 3 >> and then displays a message that an account is not available. >> .Pp Cheers! Mateusz Piotrowski