Date: Mon, 27 Jul 2020 18:57:41 +0200 From: Mateusz Piotrowski <0mp@FreeBSD.org> To: rgrimes@freebsd.org Cc: src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-head@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r363598 - head/usr.sbin/nologin Message-ID: <b71163c9-007a-cb34-4140-a3de494363be@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <202007271641.06RGftS7070235@gndrsh.dnsmgr.net> References: <202007271641.06RGftS7070235@gndrsh.dnsmgr.net>
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Hi! On 7/27/20 6:41 PM, Rodney W. Grimes wrote: >> Author: 0mp (doc,ports committer) >> Date: Mon Jul 27 10:45:47 2020 >> New Revision: 363598 >> URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/363598 >> >> Log: >> nologin.8: Improve wording > I disagree that this improves wording. The norm of action for > "logging" in Unix is to "write to syslog", not "log to syslog". Hmm, I agree, but here it is "log using syslog". Have you got any idea how to further improve this sentence? >> Reported by: yuripv >> Reviewed by: bcr, yuripv >> MFC after: 3 days >> Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D25814 >> >> Modified: >> head/usr.sbin/nologin/nologin.8 >> >> Modified: head/usr.sbin/nologin/nologin.8 >> ============================================================================== >> --- head/usr.sbin/nologin/nologin.8 Mon Jul 27 09:10:02 2020 (r363597) >> +++ head/usr.sbin/nologin/nologin.8 Mon Jul 27 10:45:47 2020 (r363598) >> @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ have been disabled. >> .Pp >> When executed, >> .Nm >> -first writes about the login attempt to >> +first logs about the login attempt using >> .Xr syslog 3 >> and then displays a message that an account is not available. >> .Pp Cheers! Mateusz Piotrowski
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