Date: Wed, 13 Jul 2005 14:37:18 +0200 From: Niclas Zeising <lothrandil@n00b.apagnu.se> To: Marc Fonvieille <blackend@FreeBSD.org> Cc: Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net>, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org, doc-committers@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers chapter.sgml Message-ID: <42D50AFE.9060203@n00b.apagnu.se> In-Reply-To: <20050713114847.GB57729@abigail.blackend.org> References: <200507130721.j6D7L2Ko034348@repoman.freebsd.org> <20050713104519.GO80131@submonkey.net> <42D4FAB1.9090407@n00b.apagnu.se> <20050713114847.GB57729@abigail.blackend.org>
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Marc Fonvieille wrote:
> On Wed, Jul 13, 2005 at 01:27:45PM +0200, Niclas Zeising wrote:
>
>>Maybe it is. Overlooked that when I made the original patch.
>>A suggestion is to say it something like: "All specific information here
>>regarding dhclient is for use with either of the ISC DHCP client or the
>>OpenBSD DHCP client."
>
> [...]
>
> Seems good; I will try to fix this night or if someone can do it ealier
> it'd be great (I have no access to the repo currently).
I made a patch with the change, so it doesn't get lost somewere. It's
attached.
//Niclas
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--- chapter.sgml.orig 2005-07-13 14:10:58.514286400 +0200
+++ chapter.sgml 2005-07-13 14:29:21.886982400 +0200
@@ -2548,10 +2548,10 @@
versions prior to 6.0 use the ISC (Internet Software
Consortium) DHCP client (&man.dhclient.8;) implementation.
Later versions use the OpenBSD <command>dhclient</command>
- taken from OpenBSD 3.7. All implementation-specific
- information here regarding <command>dhclient</command> is for
- use with both the ISC and the OpenBSD DHCP client. The DHCP
- server is the one included in the ISC distribution.</para>
+ taken from OpenBSD 3.7. All specific information here regarding
+ <command>dhclient</command> is for use with either of the
+ ISC DHCP client or the OpenBSD DHCP client. The DHCP
+ server mentioned is the one included in the ISC distribution.</para>
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