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Subject: Problem with IPSEC in handbook
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I have found a bug in the IPSEC section of the freebsd handbook:

In the document:  
http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ipsec.html

Section 14.11.2 The Problem - states:

There's no standard for what constitutes a VPN. VPNs can be implemented 
using a number of different technologies, each of which have their own 
strengths and weaknesses. This article presents a number of scenarios, 
and strategies for implementing a VPN for each scenario.

Then begins:
14.11.3 Scenario #1: Two networks, connected to the Internet, to behave 
as one

However, this html page ends without ever going into any other 
scenarios.  14.11.2 implies there should be at least 11.3, 11.4, and 
perhaps more.

The links at the bottom of this page go forward to
14.12 - Open SSH
and backward to
14.10 - OpenSSL

So I can't tell if the IPSEC document 14.11 is incomplete, or if it 
simply has improper links in it.  Thanks for taking a look at this.


			- Brian
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