From owner-svn-src-all@freebsd.org Mon Jul 27 17:17:40 2020 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-src-all@mailman.nyi.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mailman.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 939853691BD; Mon, 27 Jul 2020 17:17:40 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from freebsd@gndrsh.dnsmgr.net) Received: from gndrsh.dnsmgr.net (br1.CN84in.dnsmgr.net [69.59.192.140]) (using TLSv1 with cipher DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4BFmhh2jFyz455q; Mon, 27 Jul 2020 17:17:40 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from freebsd@gndrsh.dnsmgr.net) Received: from gndrsh.dnsmgr.net (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by gndrsh.dnsmgr.net (8.13.3/8.13.3) with ESMTP id 06RHHcUn070403; Mon, 27 Jul 2020 10:17:38 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from freebsd@gndrsh.dnsmgr.net) Received: (from freebsd@localhost) by gndrsh.dnsmgr.net (8.13.3/8.13.3/Submit) id 06RHHc0j070402; Mon, 27 Jul 2020 10:17:38 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from freebsd) From: "Rodney W. Grimes" Message-Id: <202007271717.06RHHc0j070402@gndrsh.dnsmgr.net> Subject: Re: svn commit: r363598 - head/usr.sbin/nologin In-Reply-To: To: Mateusz Piotrowski <0mp@freebsd.org> Date: Mon, 27 Jul 2020 10:17:38 -0700 (PDT) CC: rgrimes@freebsd.org, src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-head@freebsd.org Reply-To: rgrimes@freebsd.org X-Mailer: ELM [version 2.4ME+ PL121h (25)] MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII X-Rspamd-Queue-Id: 4BFmhh2jFyz455q X-Spamd-Bar: ---- Authentication-Results: mx1.freebsd.org; none X-Spamd-Result: default: False [-4.00 / 15.00]; REPLY(-4.00)[]; ASN(0.00)[asn:13868, ipnet:69.59.192.0/19, country:US] X-BeenThere: svn-src-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.33 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire src tree \(except for " user" and " projects" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 27 Jul 2020 17:17:40 -0000 [ Charset UTF-8 unsupported, converting... ] > Hi! > > On 7/27/20 6:41 PM, Rodney W. Grimes wrote: > >> Author: 0mp (doc,ports committer) > >> Date: Mon Jul 27 10:45:47 2020 > >> New Revision: 363598 > >> URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/363598 > >> > >> Log: > >> nologin.8: Improve wording > > I disagree that this improves wording. The norm of action for > > "logging" in Unix is to "write to syslog", not "log to syslog". > > Hmm, I agree, but here it is "log using syslog". Please read syslog(3) it is rather consistent about using "write to syslog". The action of calling syslog(3) is to "writes message to the system message logger." > > Have you got any idea how to further improve this sentence? No, but can we not degrade it? > > >> Reported by: yuripv > >> Reviewed by: bcr, yuripv > >> MFC after: 3 days > >> Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D25814 > >> > >> Modified: > >> head/usr.sbin/nologin/nologin.8 > >> > >> Modified: head/usr.sbin/nologin/nologin.8 > >> ============================================================================== > >> --- head/usr.sbin/nologin/nologin.8 Mon Jul 27 09:10:02 2020 (r363597) > >> +++ head/usr.sbin/nologin/nologin.8 Mon Jul 27 10:45:47 2020 (r363598) > >> @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ have been disabled. > >> .Pp > >> When executed, > >> .Nm > >> -first writes about the login attempt to > >> +first logs about the login attempt using > >> .Xr syslog 3 > >> and then displays a message that an account is not available. > >> .Pp > > Cheers! > > Mateusz Piotrowski > > -- Rod Grimes rgrimes@freebsd.org