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From: Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org>
Subject: Re: docs/40910: [PATCH] Typos & grammer fixes for /usr/share/man/man8/moused.8.gz
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The following reply was made to PR docs/40910; it has been noted by GNATS.

From: Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org>
To: Chris Pepper <pepper@rockefeller.edu>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/40910: [PATCH] Typos & grammer fixes for /usr/share/man/man8/moused.8.gz
Date: Tue, 23 Jul 2002 10:07:20 +0100

 On Mon, Jul 22, 2002 at 10:52:01PM -0400, Chris Pepper said:
 > 	
 > >Description:
 > 	The moused man page has typos & grammar errors.
 
 Hi Chris,
 
 Just two comments on this patch.
 
 >  If the mouse daemon receives the signal
 >  .Dv SIGHUP ,
 > -it will reopen the mouse port and reinitializes itself.
 > -Useful if
 > +it reopens the mouse port and reinitializes itself.
 > +This is useful if
 >  the mouse is attached/detached while the system is suspended.
 
 I'd prefer :
 
  If the mouse daemon receives the signal
  .Dv SIGHUP ,
  -it will reopen the mouse port and reinitializes itself.
  -Useful if
  +it will reopen the mouse port and reinitialize itself.
  +This is useful if
 
 Comments ?
 
 Everything else in this PR looks good to me.
 
 Ceri

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