From owner-svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Wed Dec 4 11:53:13 2019 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@mailman.nyi.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mailman.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9CC791AFF50; Wed, 4 Dec 2019 11:53:13 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from crees@FreeBSD.org) Received: from mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:3]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-digest SHA256) (Client CN "mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org", Issuer "Let's Encrypt Authority X3" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 47ScgF3bfsz3GQZ; Wed, 4 Dec 2019 11:53:13 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from crees@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org (repo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 5CA96279EA; Wed, 4 Dec 2019 11:53:13 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from crees@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.37]) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id xB4BrDlZ071430; Wed, 4 Dec 2019 11:53:13 GMT (envelope-from crees@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from crees@localhost) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id xB4BrDJb071429; Wed, 4 Dec 2019 11:53:13 GMT (envelope-from crees@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201912041153.xB4BrDJb071429@repo.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: repo.freebsd.org: crees set sender to crees@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Chris Rees Date: Wed, 4 Dec 2019 11:53:13 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r53655 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config X-SVN-Group: doc-head X-SVN-Commit-Author: crees X-SVN-Commit-Paths: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config X-SVN-Commit-Revision: 53655 X-SVN-Commit-Repository: doc MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 04 Dec 2019 11:53:13 -0000 Author: crees Date: Wed Dec 4 11:53:12 2019 New Revision: 53655 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/53655 Log: Simplify language by removing spurious comma. While here, "must" conjugates with plural as well as singular. PR: docs/241674 Submitted by: PauAmma Reviewed by: bcr (first point) Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D22648 Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml Wed Dec 4 10:02:19 2019 (r53654) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml Wed Dec 4 11:53:12 2019 (r53655) @@ -986,8 +986,8 @@ lo0: flags=8049<UP,LOOPBACK,RUNNING,MULTICAST> m before adding any lines. - In the case, there is no DHCP server, - the NIC(s) have to be configured manually. + If there is no DHCP server, + the NIC(s) must be configured manually. Add a line for each NIC present on the system, as seen in this example: