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List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 28 Nov 2013 07:35:04 -0000 --zhXaljGHf11kAtnf Content-Type: text/plain; charset=koi8-u Content-Disposition: inline There's a second lap, which includes received suggestions. -- WBR, Taras Korenko --zhXaljGHf11kAtnf Content-Type: text/x-diff; charset=koi8-u Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="02.en.hb.users.diff" Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.xml =================================================================== --- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.xml (revision 43259) +++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.xml (working copy) @@ -78,8 +78,8 @@ The user name is typed at the login: - prompt. User names must be unique on the system as no two - users can have the same user name. There are a number of + prompt. Each user must have a unique user name. + There are a number of rules for creating valid user names, documented in &man.passwd.5;. Typically user names consist of eight or fewer all lower case characters in order to maintain @@ -91,9 +91,7 @@ Password - Each account has an associated password. While the - password can be blank, this is highly discouraged and - every account should have a password. + Each account has an associated password. @@ -148,9 +146,9 @@ Password change time - By default &os; does not force users to change their - passwords periodically. Password expiration can be - enforced on a per-user basis, forcing some or all users to + By default, passwords do not expire. + However, password expiration can be + enabled on a per-user basis, forcing some or all users to change their passwords after a certain amount of time has elapsed. @@ -377,7 +375,7 @@ /usr/share/skel skeleton directory - &man.adduser.8; is a simple program for adding new users + &man.adduser.8; is a simple program for adding new users. When a new user is added, this program automatically updates /etc/passwd and /etc/group. It also creates a home @@ -527,7 +525,7 @@ When passed no options, aside from an optional username, &man.chpass.1; displays an editor containing user information. - When the user exists from the editor, the user database is + When the user exits from the editor, the user database is updated with the new information. @@ -773,8 +771,7 @@ this limit too small may hinder a user's productivity as it is often useful to be logged in multiple times or to execute pipelines. Some tasks, such as compiling a large - program, spawn multiple processes and other intermediate - preprocessors. + program, start lots of processes. @@ -818,7 +815,7 @@ The limit on the amount of network memory, and - thus mbufssbsizelimiting userssbsize, a user may consume in order to limit network + thus mbufssbsizelimiting userssbsize, a user may consume. This can be generally used to limit network communications. @@ -960,7 +957,7 @@ In this example, the argument to is a comma-delimited list of users who are to be added to the group. Unlike the previous example, these users are appended to the - group list and do not replace the list of existing users in the + group and do not replace the list of existing users in the group. --zhXaljGHf11kAtnf--