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Subject: Re: svn commit: r270268 - head/share/man/man4
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On Thu, Aug 21, 2014 at 8:50 AM, Bjoern A. Zeeb <bz@freebsd.org> wrote:

> Author: bz
> Date: Thu Aug 21 12:50:11 2014
> New Revision: 270268
> URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/270268
>
> Log:
>   Document MAC address selection and setting for atse(4).
>
>   Submitted by: brooks
>   MFC after:    3 days
>   Sponsored by: DARPA/AFRL
>
> Modified:
>   head/share/man/man4/altera_atse.4
>
> Modified: head/share/man/man4/altera_atse.4
>
> ==============================================================================
> --- head/share/man/man4/altera_atse.4   Thu Aug 21 12:30:01 2014
> (r270267)
> +++ head/share/man/man4/altera_atse.4   Thu Aug 21 12:50:11 2014
> (r270268)
> +If the stored address is invalid, for example all zero's, multicast, or
> the
> +default address shipped on all DE4 boards (00:07:ed:ff:ed:15) then a
> random
> +address is generated when the device is attached.
>

I think that "all zeros" does not take an apostrophe.

Also, the use of commas is slightly unclear, since "for example all zeros"
is really a
parenthetical, not a member of the comma-separated list.

-Ben