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From: Marc Fonvieille <blackend@FreeBSD.org>
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Subject: Re: docs/76057: Handbook method for obtaining OpenOffice doesn't
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On Sun, Feb 27, 2005 at 05:16:49PM +0100, Remko Lodder wrote:
> 
> So that would make the below diff? :-)
> 
> Index: chapter.sgml
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/desktop/chapter.sgml,v
> retrieving revision 1.50
> diff -u -r1.50 chapter.sgml
> --- chapter.sgml        20 Feb 2005 12:51:33 -0000      1.50
> +++ chapter.sgml        27 Feb 2005 15:54:46 -0000
> @@ -635,6 +635,15 @@
>  
>        <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg_add -r openoffice</userinput></screen>
>  
> +      <note>
> +        <para>If you are <emphasis>not</emphasis> running a -RELEASE
> +         version of &os; this might not work.  You should then look on
> +         the FreeBSD OpenOffice Porting Team web site and download the
> +         appropriate package and install the package using
> +         &man.pkg_add.1;.  You will also find the latest version and
> +         the latest development version here.</para>
> +      </note>

Maybe I'm picky but I'm not sure about the use of "here" (there?),
perhaps the last sentence may be reworded in "You will also find the
latest production and developement versions...".  I dunno, someone with
better english skills should correct me.

Marc