From owner-freebsd-doc  Fri Sep  8  4:50:29 2000
Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org
Received: from nothing-going-on.demon.co.uk (nothing-going-on.demon.co.uk [193.237.89.66])
	by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP
	id 532E437B422; Fri,  8 Sep 2000 04:50:24 -0700 (PDT)
Received: (from nik@localhost)
	by nothing-going-on.demon.co.uk (8.11.0/8.11.0) id e88ANvm31966;
	Fri, 8 Sep 2000 11:23:57 +0100 (BST)
	(envelope-from nik)
Date: Fri, 8 Sep 2000 11:23:56 +0100
From: Nik Clayton <nik@freebsd.org>
To: Mitsuru IWASAKI <iwasaki@jp.FreeBSD.org>
Cc: freebsd-current@freebsd.org, freebsd-doc@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: CFR: acpi userland manpages
Message-ID: <20000908112356.B31852@canyon.nothing-going-on.org>
References: <20000901000931V.iwasaki@jp.FreeBSD.org>
Mime-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii
Content-Disposition: inline
User-Agent: Mutt/1.2.5i
In-Reply-To: <20000901000931V.iwasaki@jp.FreeBSD.org>; from iwasaki@jp.FreeBSD.org on Fri, Sep 01, 2000 at 12:09:31AM +0900
Organization: FreeBSD Project <URL:http://www.freebsd.org/>
Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG
Precedence: bulk
X-Loop: FreeBSD.org

On Fri, Sep 01, 2000 at 12:09:31AM +0900, Mitsuru IWASAKI wrote:
> Hi, I've just imported acpi userland tools and writing manpages for
> them with contributers in Japan.
> Please review them and send any comments (or diffs) for me
> (iwasaki@jp.FreeBSD.org) in terms of English/roff or whatever.
> 
> The draft version of manpages are available at
> http://people.FreeBSD.org/~iwasaki/acpi/acpidump.8
> http://people.FreeBSD.org/~iwasaki/acpi/amldb.8

I've just found the time to give them a quick once over, and I'd have no
problem with them going in as they are.  There are some grammar changes,
and possibly terminology changes that might be appropriate, but I haven't
got the time to enumerate them all at the moment, and I'm sure the wider
community can make suggestions as time goes on.

Sheldon can probably render an opinion on their usage of the macros.

N
-- 
Internet connection, $19.95 a month.  Computer, $799.95.  Modem, $149.95.
Telephone line, $24.95 a month.  Software, free.  USENET transmission,
hundreds if not thousands of dollars.  Thinking before posting, priceless.
Somethings in life you can't buy.  For everything else, there's MasterCard.
  -- Graham Reed, in the Scary Devil Monastery


To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org
with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message