Date: Tue, 19 Sep 2000 13:18:00 -0400 From: Eric Ogren <eogren@earthlink.net> To: Ben Smithurst <ben@FreeBSD.org> Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/21399: Handbook DHCP section doesn't mention bpf Message-ID: <20000919131800.A1206@earthlink.net> In-Reply-To: <20000919170950.A30774@strontium.scientia.demon.co.uk>; from ben@FreeBSD.org on Tue, Sep 19, 2000 at 05:09:50PM %2B0100 References: <200009191500.IAA51171@freefall.freebsd.org> <20000919170950.A30774@strontium.scientia.demon.co.uk>
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On Tue, Sep 19, 2000 at 05:09:50PM +0100, Ben Smithurst wrote: > Eric Ogren wrote: > > > > + device is compiled into your kernel. To do this, add > > + <quote>psuedo-device bpf</quote> to your kernel > > <literal> would be better than <quote> here, I think. OK. I wasn't really sure when it's appropriate to use <literal>, so I just used <quote> instead, since that's how I would format it in plain text. > > + part of the <emphasis>GENERIC</emphasis> kernel that is > > Probably <filename> for GENERIC, but I'm not sure "GENERIC" is being > used just as a filename. I don't think emphasis is right, I'd use > <literal> (which I tend to use for anything I want in monospace when > there isn't a better tag) if <filename> isn't right. I didn't really think emphasis was right, but I thought filename was even less right, and I didn't see a <kernel> tag in the FDP primer :). I guess > Please don't include gratuitous whitespace diffs along with a diff which > changes content. It just makes life hard(er) for the translators, and [slightly rearrange the quote] > - <programlisting> > + <programlisting> > ifconfig_fxp0="DHCP" > - </programlisting> > + </programlisting> OK, that answers my question. This whitespace change was induced by a content change (that <programlisting> became part of a <listitem>), so I wasn't sure if it was appropriate or not. > > I shall have to warn you soon, that if you send many more good diffs > like this, someone is likely to say "I'm sick of you, Eric. Here's your > commit bit, now commit the damn patches yourself." :-) We'll see... :) I'm (finally) off to school in a couple of days, so expect my output to drop at least a little bit. Eric To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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