From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Dec 6 18:25:01 2006 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 68E9016A40F for ; Wed, 6 Dec 2006 18:25:01 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from dougb@FreeBSD.org) Received: from mail2.fluidhosting.com (mx22.fluidhosting.com [204.14.89.5]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with SMTP id ABDA643E0A for ; Wed, 6 Dec 2006 18:13:53 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from dougb@FreeBSD.org) Received: (qmail 6797 invoked by uid 399); 6 Dec 2006 18:14:01 -0000 Received: from localhost (HELO ?192.168.0.7?) (dougb@dougbarton.us@127.0.0.1) by localhost with SMTP; 6 Dec 2006 18:14:01 -0000 X-Originating-IP: 127.0.0.1 Message-ID: <45770867.6010808@FreeBSD.org> Date: Wed, 06 Dec 2006 10:13:59 -0800 From: Doug Barton Organization: http://www.freebsd.org/ User-Agent: Thunderbird 1.5.0.8 (X11/20061125) MIME-Version: 1.0 To: Dmitry Morozovsky References: <200612041443.kB4EhpBG035838@repoman.freebsd.org> <4574A587.3050903@FreeBSD.org> <20061205135214.K72517@woozle.rinet.ru> In-Reply-To: <20061205135214.K72517@woozle.rinet.ru> X-Enigmail-Version: 0.94.1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org, Giorgos Keramidas Subject: Removing CIDR references (Was: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install chapter.sgml) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 06 Dec 2006 18:25:01 -0000 Dmitry Morozovsky wrote: > On Mon, 4 Dec 2006, Doug Barton wrote: > > DB> > Modified files: > DB> > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install chapter.sgml > DB> > Log: > DB> > A class C network for 192.168.0.0/24 includes the address > DB> > range 192.168.0.0-192.168.0.255, not 192.168.0.0-192.168.255.255 > DB> > > DB> > Submitted by: Tom Van Looy > DB> > > DB> > Revision Changes Path > DB> > 1.338 +1 -1 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml > DB> > > DB> > http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/cvsweb.cgi/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml.diff?&r1=1.337&r2=1.338&f=h > DB> > > DB> > DB> In an ideal world, all references to Class [ABC] networks would > DB> disappear from our docs, and be replaced by their CIDR equivalents. > > There are suprisingly small number of such places. What do you think about the > patch attached? Great start! A few comments in line. > Index: articles/filtering-bridges/article.sgml > =================================================================== > RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/filtering-bridges/article.sgml,v > retrieving revision 1.20 > diff -u -r1.20 article.sgml > --- articles/filtering-bridges/article.sgml 8 Aug 2004 13:43:54 -0000 1.20 > +++ articles/filtering-bridges/article.sgml 5 Dec 2006 10:53:35 -0000 > @@ -276,7 +276,7 @@ > xl0 towards the inside > (LAN). The bridge machine has the IP role="ipaddr">1.2.3.4 (it is not possible that your > - ISP can give you a class A address like this, but for > + ISP can give you an address quite like this, but for > our example it is good). > > # Things that we have kept state on before get to go through in a hurry > Index: books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml > =================================================================== > RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml,v > retrieving revision 1.338 > diff -u -r1.338 chapter.sgml > --- books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml 4 Dec 2006 14:43:50 -0000 1.338 > +++ books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml 5 Dec 2006 10:53:35 -0000 > @@ -2356,7 +2356,7 @@ > > > The address block being used for this local area > - network is a Class C block > + network is a (historical) Class C block > (192.168.0.0 - > 192.168.0.255). > The default netmask is for a Class C network network is 192.168.0.0/24, which encompasses the range from 192.168.0.0 -192.168.0.255). The default netmask for this network > Index: books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml > =================================================================== > RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml,v > retrieving revision 1.173 > diff -u -r1.173 chapter.sgml > --- books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml 30 May 2006 23:08:24 -0000 1.173 > +++ books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml 5 Dec 2006 10:53:35 -0000 > @@ -760,7 +760,7 @@ > > For example, if you have three dialup customers, > fred, sam, and > - mary, that you route class C networks > + mary, that you route /24 CIDR networks > for, you would type the following: > > &prompt.root; ln -s /etc/ppp/ppp-shell /etc/ppp/ppp-fred > @@ -827,7 +827,7 @@ > should also contain routing information for each static > IP user if required. The line below would add a route > for the 203.14.101.0 > - class C via the client's ppp link. > + /24 CIDR network via the client's ppp link. for the 203.14.101.0/24 network via the client's ppp link.