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From: Glen Barber <gjb@FreeBSD.org>
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Subject: svn commit: r50110 -
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Author: gjb
Date: Thu Mar 30 22:00:22 2017
New Revision: 50110
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/50110

Log:
  Fix grammar.
  
  Sponsored by:	The FreeBSD Foundation

Modified:
  user/gjb/releng-rewrite/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng/releng-terminology.xml

Modified: user/gjb/releng-rewrite/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng/releng-terminology.xml
==============================================================================
--- user/gjb/releng-rewrite/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng/releng-terminology.xml	Thu Mar 30 20:32:59 2017	(r50109)
+++ user/gjb/releng-rewrite/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng/releng-terminology.xml	Thu Mar 30 22:00:22 2017	(r50110)
@@ -20,8 +20,8 @@
       &os; Developers.</para>
     ?>
 
-    <para>The code slush is not a hard freeze on the tree, the
-      &team.re; requests that bugs in the existing code base take
+    <para>Although the code slush is not a hard freeze on the tree,
+      the &team.re; requests that bugs in the existing code base take
       priority over new features.</para>
 
     <para>The code slush does not enforce commit approvals to the