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From: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Wed, 9 Nov 2005 02:56:21 +0000 (UTC)
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trhodes     2005-11-09 02:56:21 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/introduction 
                                                           chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  Reword a paragraph to make it more clear,
  Use &os; in place of FreeBSD,
  Avoid "sexist" language.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.17      +3 -4      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml