From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Oct 1 20:04:10 2012 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 35C02106564A for ; Mon, 1 Oct 2012 20:04:10 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from utisoft@gmail.com) Received: from mail-la0-f54.google.com (mail-la0-f54.google.com [209.85.215.54]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A8D9F8FC0C for ; Mon, 1 Oct 2012 20:04:09 +0000 (UTC) Received: by lage12 with SMTP id e12so2521855lag.13 for ; Mon, 01 Oct 2012 13:04:02 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20120113; h=mime-version:sender:in-reply-to:references:from:date :x-google-sender-auth:message-id:subject:to:cc:content-type; bh=xxmBiEdK9vgcMha4Ou7MbyQh7bV0pjpYqJ1h1cm2kOk=; b=d5fWjbA9xJtgYZTNlvT13/sHxuO5cKYNm/qK9iJK8L3F4iK+uSkOqMkF3YK8EOme/n ZYqyivWEiM+pwmqf7AWOsXLfBD42u5iQVeHiNeAYYFb3CeGewKDV5yF3Wf+vbR9blC47 05eG+ysBL1M/SLIUxwZQxWF94gyIUGJewzBY3LyUgszn4lB1xzmlAt0vztQpFNJVYMX1 kddHLPMH6g4ZbU3HXTU8QL2K+JQkm6aD8OzvzyrIZ+2++IgKvrVwUkej5KYZ4sv3w66x poe1ZIMmOt3o8ltipH3Has5pROwNXXlN2NooNcQPZ1NcmVsDkd46t9lI/am5wxn8Gfuw AP1A== Received: by 10.112.25.167 with SMTP id d7mr47778lbg.74.1349121841936; Mon, 01 Oct 2012 13:04:01 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 Sender: utisoft@gmail.com Received: by 10.112.100.133 with HTTP; Mon, 1 Oct 2012 13:03:31 -0700 (PDT) In-Reply-To: References: From: Chris Rees Date: Mon, 1 Oct 2012 21:03:31 +0100 X-Google-Sender-Auth: bmEn7Ayi07qp7zlTJoANO0d7gQQ Message-ID: To: Cpet Services Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Updates to features.html X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 01 Oct 2012 20:04:10 -0000 On 1 October 2012 20:48, Cpet Services wrote: > Thank you for the tips. Also, ZFS is mentioned in 7.X, but not for 8/9-- this is a Big Thing for us! Nice work. Chris > On Mon, Oct 1, 2012 at 12:34 PM, Eitan Adler wrote: > >> On 1 October 2012 11:00, Cpet Services wrote: >> > I am trying to update features.html. Please look at >> > http://cpet.multics.org/freebsddocs/data/features.html >> >> General comments: >> >> This page should be aimed at people that may have heard of FreeBSD but >> are not current users. As such avoid using FreeBSD terminology or >> giving configuration information. This of this as a marketing >> document, not a technical one. >> >> Specific comments: >> ""Over ten years of work have been put into..." - its a bit older than >> 10 years now ;) >> "FreeBSD 1/i386 a.out binaries on FreeBSD/amd64" - pretty cool, but a >> feature? >> Hhook - the description is pretty technical, and presupposes knowledge >> of pfil(9) - perhaps some more general text is needed? >> Accounting API - no need to specify how to enable it - perhaps make >> this a link to the handbook page. Actually it would be cool if *all* >> the headers were links to handbook pages. >> >> I didn't look in detail past the 9.0 section. >> >> > And tell me what you think of it. >> >> Thanks for working on this: this is one of the most important pages on >> the website! I hope that your work makes it in. >> >> Have you seen http://wiki.freebsd.org/WhatsNew/FreeBSD10 as well? >> >> -- >> Eitan Adler >> > > > > -- > -------------------------------------------------------- > Chris Petrik > FreeBSD Contributor > Reincarnated > cpet on irc > _______________________________________________ > freebsd-doc@freebsd.org mailing list > http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/freebsd-doc > To unsubscribe, send any mail to "freebsd-doc-unsubscribe@freebsd.org" >