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From: Mark Linimon <linimon@FreeBSD.org>
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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml
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linimon     2004/01/20 15:56:34 PST

  FreeBSD doc repository (ports committer)

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml 
  Log:
  [ports committer:] in a few cases, the Handbook introduces a concept,
  elaborates on the concept, and then justifies the reason for the concept.
  This make the document read a little bit strangely.  This fix switches
  the latter two.  Very little new text is introduced, just some rewording.
  
  PR:                     docs/61653 (partial)
  Reviewed by:            ceri
  Approved by:            ceri
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.360     +32 -33    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml