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From: Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Sun, 7 Sep 2003 07:49:26 -0700 (PDT)
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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking
	chapter.sgml
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ceri        2003/09/07 07:49:26 PDT

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking 
                                                       chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  o Change one usage of "i.e." to "e.g." where it makes more sense, and remove
    an unnecessary colon.
  
  o If X is the chief weakness of something, then it actually is the most
    important one.  Remove some confusing text from a sentence.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.241     +2 -2      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml