From owner-freebsd-doc Tue Feb 11 12: 0:20 2003 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3E89B37B405 for ; Tue, 11 Feb 2003 12:00:19 -0800 (PST) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [216.136.204.21]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 87DC543F85 for ; Tue, 11 Feb 2003 12:00:18 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.12.6/8.12.6) with ESMTP id h1BK0INS074036 for ; Tue, 11 Feb 2003 12:00:18 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.12.6/8.12.6/Submit) id h1BK0Ia8074035; Tue, 11 Feb 2003 12:00:18 -0800 (PST) Date: Tue, 11 Feb 2003 12:00:18 -0800 (PST) Message-Id: <200302112000.h1BK0Ia8074035@freefall.freebsd.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Cc: From: Tom Rhodes Subject: Re: docs/48125: [COMMENTS] to your extremely useful patch Reply-To: Tom Rhodes Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org The following reply was made to PR docs/48125; it has been noted by GNATS. From: Tom Rhodes To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/48125: [COMMENTS] to your extremely useful patch Date: Tue, 11 Feb 2003 14:52:45 -0500 I really like everything you've done here, thanks alot for the time you have spent. However I have but one comment. :) -.It Er 49 EADDRNOTAVAIL Em "Cannot assign requested address" . +.It Er 49 EADDRNOTAVAIL Em "Can't assign requested address" . Normally results from an attempt to create a socket with an address not on this machine. .It Er 50 ENETDOWN Em "Network is down" . @@ -341,7 +341,7 @@ An request to send or receive data was disallowed because the socket was not connected and (when sending on a datagram socket) no address was supplied. -.It Er 58 ESHUTDOWN Em "Cannot send after socket shutdown" . +.It Er 58 ESHUTDOWN Em "Can't send after socket shutdown" . A request to send data was disallowed because the socket had already been shut down with a previous .Xr shutdown 2 In both of these hunks we are using contractions, something we have tried to avoid completely in the doc project. Personally, this is one time I would like the code to be customed to the manual page. In other words, I would like the output errors to be changed to match the manual page instead of the other way around. I can do this sometime soon, however if you have a patch I can do it sooner :) -- Tom Rhodes To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message