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Date: Tue, 7 Dec 2004 14:13:58 -0500
From: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
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Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac chapter.sgml
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On Tue, 7 Dec 2004 18:50:36 +0000 (UTC)
Hiten Pandya <hmp@FreeBSD.org> wrote:

> hmp         2004-12-07 18:50:36 UTC
> 
>   FreeBSD doc repository
> 
>   Modified files:
>     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac chapter.sgml 
>   Log:
>   Minor clarification (data sensitivity) in the MAC glossary.


The "clarification" has made the sentence almost impossible to
comprehend.  I looked at it since it appeard in my recently
prepared patch, glad I seen it.

Then Ceri pointed it out on the lists (which I noticed before
making this reply).

I don't mind the additional information you added, but please
use a comma in place of (...) and rewrite the sentence to a
comprehendable state.

Thanks!

-- 
Tom Rhodes