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Author: wblock
Date: Thu May 16 01:03:16 2013
New Revision: 41633
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41633

Log:
  Add "read-only" as the preferred form.  Discussed at Doc Lounge 2013.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml	Wed May 15 14:07:01 2013	(r41632)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml	Thu May 16 01:03:16 2013	(r41633)
@@ -479,6 +479,10 @@ GB.  Hardware compression &hellip;</lite
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
+	<para>read-only</para>
+      </listitem>
+
+      <listitem>
 	<para>web server</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>