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Subject: Re: docs/56902: [patch] articles/fbsd-from-scratch: add/fix sgml
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The following reply was made to PR docs/56902; it has been noted by GNATS.

From: Josef El-Rayes <j.el-rayes@daemon.li>
To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
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Subject: Re: docs/56902: [patch] articles/fbsd-from-scratch: add/fix sgml tags
Date: Sun, 21 Sep 2003 17:15:34 +0200

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 hi!
 
 i reworked the patch to not touch X11.
 it marks up "make" as application and not as filename.
 it marks up a hint as "note:" and not as a single item in an
 itemizedlist.
 
 greets, josef
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 --- article.sgml.orig	Sun Aug 17 18:25:32 2003
 +++ article.sgml	Sun Sep 21 17:10:41 2003
 @@ -444,7 +444,7 @@
        <literal>CONFIGURE_ARGS</literal>.  The port
        <filename>Makefile</filename> will use this as an initial value
        and augment some other essential args.  The difference to
 -      specifying a <filename>make</filename> variable on the command line
 +      specifying a <application>make</application> variable on the command line
        with</para>
  
      <programlisting>news inn-stable make CONFIGURE_ARGS="--enable-uucp-rnews --enable-setgid-inews" install</programlisting>
 @@ -566,14 +566,10 @@
        <literal>4-STABLE</literal> may want to consider the following
        areas:</para>
  
 -    <itemizedlist>
 -      <listitem>
 -        <para>If you do not use the device file system
 +    <note><para>If you do not use the device file system
          (<literal>devfs</literal>) you may want to create devices for
          some of your hardware with &man.MAKEDEV.8; in stage one, step
 -        six.</para>
 -      </listitem>
 -    </itemizedlist>
 +        six.</para></note>
  
    </sect1>
  </article>
 
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