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Date:      Wed, 5 May 1999 16:13:56 +0900 (JST)
From:      kuma@jp.freebsd.org
To:        FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Subject:   docs/11506: typos in dhclient.conf.5
Message-ID:  <199905050713.QAA12359@laurel.nk.rim.or.jp>

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>Number:         11506
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       some typos in dhclient.conf.5
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Wed May  5 00:10:00 PDT 1999
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Norihiro Kumagai
>Release:        3.1-19990417-STABLE
>Organization:
FreeBSD manual Japanese Translation Project
>Environment:

	3.1-19990417-STABLE, and later(I guess)

>Description:

	There are some possible typos I have found in
	the dhclient.conf.5 manpage.
	Please consult the following diff data.

>How-To-Repeat:

	(snip)

>Fix:
	Please apply the following patch data:
	And please remove lines beginning with '.\"X ', because
	it is my comment.

--- dhclient.conf.5-en.org	Wed May  5 11:16:26 1999
+++ dhclient.conf.5-en	Wed May  5 15:19:18 1999
@@ -292,7 +292,8 @@
  \fBlease {\fR \fIlease-declaration\fR [ ... \fIlease-declaration ] \fB}\fR
 .PP
 The DHCP client may decide after some period of time (see \fBPROTOCOL
-TIMING\fR) decide that it is not going to succeed in contacting a
+TIMING\fR) that it is not going to succeed in contacting a
+.\" BAD DUP decide's?!
 server.   At that time, it consults its own database of old leases and
 tests each one that has not yet timed out by pinging the listed router
 for that lease to see if that lease could work.   It is possible to
@@ -392,7 +393,8 @@
 argument is passed on the ifconfig command line when configuring te
 interface.
 .PP
-The dhcp client automatically declares this parameter if it used a
+The dhcp client automatically declares this parameter if it uses a
+.\"X it uses? or it is used?
 media type (see the
 .B media
 statement) when configuring the interface in order to obtain a lease.
@@ -430,8 +432,8 @@
 should generally be four digits except for really long leases.  The
 month is specified as a number starting with 1 for January.  The day
 of the month is likewise specified starting with 1.  The hour is a
-number between 0 and 23, the minute a number between 0 and 69, and the
-second also a number between 0 and 69.
+number between 0 and 23, the minute a number between 0 and 59, and the
+second also a number between 0 and 59.
 .SH ALIAS DECLARATIONS
  \fBalias { \fI declarations ... \fB}\fR
 .PP
@@ -455,7 +457,9 @@
 .SH OTHER DECLARATIONS
  \fBreject \fIip-address\fB;\fR
 .PP
-The reject statement causes the DHCP client to reject offers from
+The
+.B reject
+statement causes the DHCP client to reject offers from
 servers who use the specified address as a server identifier.   This
 can be used to avoid being configured by rogue or misconfigured dhcp
 servers, although it should be a last resort - better to track down
@@ -486,7 +490,7 @@
 probably right (no guarantees).
 .PP
 The media setup is only used for the initial phase of address
-acquisition (the DHCPDISCOVER and DHCPOFFER packtes).   Once an
+acquisition (the DHCPDISCOVER and DHCPOFFER packets).   Once an
 address has been acquired, the dhcp client will record it in its lease
 database and will record the media type used to acquire the address.
 Whenever the client tries to renew the lease, it will use that same

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