From owner-freebsd-current Fri Oct 18 13:31:23 2002 Delivered-To: freebsd-current@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D2F1D37B401; Fri, 18 Oct 2002 13:31:22 -0700 (PDT) Received: from gull.mail.pas.earthlink.net (gull.mail.pas.earthlink.net [207.217.120.84]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 71B2B43E9C; Fri, 18 Oct 2002 13:31:22 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from tlambert2@mindspring.com) Received: from pool0209.cvx21-bradley.dialup.earthlink.net ([209.179.192.209] helo=mindspring.com) by gull.mail.pas.earthlink.net with esmtp (Exim 3.33 #1) id 182dm8-0005Qw-00; Fri, 18 Oct 2002 13:31:16 -0700 Message-ID: <3DB06F4C.326745E7@mindspring.com> Date: Fri, 18 Oct 2002 13:30:04 -0700 From: Terry Lambert X-Mailer: Mozilla 4.79 [en] (Win98; U) X-Accept-Language: en MIME-Version: 1.0 To: Sheldon Hearn Cc: Benno Rice , current@freebsd.org Subject: Re: kthread.9 out of date References: <1034933896.638.1.camel@ratchet.jeamland.net> <20021018105713.GK28875@starjuice.net> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Sender: owner-freebsd-current@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.ORG Sheldon Hearn wrote: > Looks good from a style point of view. Just one nit I spotted: > > +The > +.Fa pages > +argument specifies the size of the new kthread's kernel stack in pages. > +If 0 is used, the default kernel stack size is allocated. > > This is the first use of the word "kthread". Consider replacing it with > "kernel thread" as used elsewhere in the page. "...the new kernel threads' kernel stack..." ...I suggest: "...the new kernel threads' stack...." -- Terry To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-current" in the body of the message