From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sat Oct 9 11:00:43 2004 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3C11A16A4CE for ; Sat, 9 Oct 2004 11:00:43 +0000 (GMT) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [216.136.204.21]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0FED343D4C for ; Sat, 9 Oct 2004 11:00:43 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.12.11/8.12.11) with ESMTP id i99B0fNn001169 for ; Sat, 9 Oct 2004 11:00:41 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.12.11/8.12.11/Submit) id i99B0fmV001168; Sat, 9 Oct 2004 11:00:41 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Sat, 9 Oct 2004 11:00:41 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200410091100.i99B0fmV001168@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, Joel Dahl Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A590316A4CE for ; Sat, 9 Oct 2004 10:53:32 +0000 (GMT) Received: from av6-2-sn3.vrr.skanova.net (av6-2-sn3.vrr.skanova.net [81.228.9.180]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id C4DE343D2F for ; Sat, 9 Oct 2004 10:53:29 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from joel@automatvapen.se) Received: by av6-2-sn3.vrr.skanova.net (Postfix, from userid 502) id 98B2A3820D; Sat, 9 Oct 2004 12:53:26 +0200 (CEST) Received: from smtp3-2-sn3.vrr.skanova.net (smtp3-2-sn3.vrr.skanova.net [81.228.9.102]) by av6-2-sn3.vrr.skanova.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id 04C0338120 for ; Sat, 9 Oct 2004 12:53:26 +0200 (CEST) Received: from dude.automatvapen.se (t7o955p46.telia.com [213.66.32.46]) by smtp3-2-sn3.vrr.skanova.net (Postfix) with SMTP id C0FB037E43 for ; Sat, 9 Oct 2004 12:53:24 +0200 (CEST) Received: by dude.automatvapen.se (sSMTP sendmail emulation); Sat, 9 Oct 2004 12:53:47 +0200 Message-Id: <20041009105324.C0FB037E43@smtp3-2-sn3.vrr.skanova.net> Date: Sat, 9 Oct 2004 12:53:47 +0200 From: "Joel Dahl" To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Subject: docs/72462: [PATCH] A few minor corrections to the hubs article X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list Reply-To: Joel Dahl List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 09 Oct 2004 11:00:43 -0000 >Number: 72462 >Category: docs >Synopsis: [PATCH] A few minor corrections to the hubs article >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sat Oct 09 11:00:40 GMT 2004 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Joel Dahl >Release: FreeBSD 5.2.1-RELEASE-p9 i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD dude.automatvapen.se 5.2.1-RELEASE-p9 FreeBSD 5.2.1-RELEASE-p9 #1: Sat Jul 10 16:52:28 CEST 2004 root@dude.automatvapen.se:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/WORKSTATION i386 >Description: Attached patch includes grammatical fixes and a few corrections. >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: --- hub.diff begins here --- --- article.sgml Sat Oct 2 18:25:55 2004 +++ new.article.sgml Sat Oct 9 12:27:48 2004 @@ -162,8 +162,8 @@ FTP distributions. FTP access must be anonymous, and no upload/download ratios are allowed (a ridiculous thing anyway). - Upload capability is not required (and must - never be allowed for the FreeBSD file space). + Upload capability is not required (and must never + be allowed for the FreeBSD file space). Also the FreeBSD archive should be available under the path /pub/FreeBSD. @@ -666,28 +666,25 @@ environment variables, like SGML_CATALOG_FILES. Also have a look at your /etc/make.conf - (copy /etc/defaults/make.conf if + (copy /usr/share/examples/etc/make.conf if you do not have one), and look at the DOC_LANG variable. Now you are probably ready to run make - in you doc directory (/usr/share/doc + in your doc directory (/usr/share/doc by default) and build the documentation. Again you need to make it accessible for your web server and make sure the links point to the right location. The building of the documentation, as well as lots - of side issues, is documented itself in: + of side issues, is documented itself in the fdp-primer. Please read this piece of documentation, especially if you have problems building the documentation. - - - XXX MAYBE THIS CAN BE LINKED FROM WITHIN - NOT USING AN ABSOLUTE URL XXX - - + @@ -845,7 +842,7 @@ - I'm an official mirror, what is the right site for me? + I am an official mirror, what is the right site for me? In general the description in still applies. Of course you may want to put some --- hub.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: