From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sat Apr 4 00:11:28 2009 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E67DA106566B for ; Sat, 4 Apr 2009 00:11:28 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from trhodes@FreeBSD.org) Received: from gloomweaver.pittgoth.com (gloomweaver.pittgoth.com [205.134.165.107]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A94A08FC1B for ; Sat, 4 Apr 2009 00:11:28 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from trhodes@FreeBSD.org) Received: from localhost.fbsdsecure.org (net-ix.gw.ai.net [205.134.160.6]) (authenticated bits=0) by gloomweaver.pittgoth.com (8.14.3/8.14.3) with ESMTP id n3403EUM029543 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT); Fri, 3 Apr 2009 20:03:15 -0400 (EDT) (envelope-from trhodes@FreeBSD.org) Date: Fri, 3 Apr 2009 19:59:07 -0400 From: Tom Rhodes To: Manolis Kiagias Message-Id: <20090403195907.2a208110.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <49D3479D.9010405@gmail.com> References: <200904010900.n31906NT046593@freefall.freebsd.org> <49D3479D.9010405@gmail.com> X-Mailer: Sylpheed version 1.0.6 (GTK+ 1.2.10; amd64-portbld-freebsd8.0) Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/131568: Cleanup for ipf documentation X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 04 Apr 2009 00:11:29 -0000 On Wed, 01 Apr 2009 13:53:17 +0300 Manolis Kiagias wrote: > Tom Rhodes wrote: > > The following reply was made to PR docs/131568; it has been noted by GNATS. > > > > From: Tom Rhodes > > To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org > > Cc: pepper@cbio.mskcc.org > > Subject: Re: docs/131568: Cleanup for ipf documentation > > Date: Wed, 1 Apr 2009 04:12:42 -0400 > > > > Hi Chris, > > > > I'm trying to compare your fixed version to the current one. Could > > you perhaps generate a unified diff against the SGML files? It > > would be much easier for us to parse. Thanks! > > > > BTW: The primer can be found at this URL: > > http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/index.html > > > > -- > > Tom Rhodes > > > > I am also in the process of finishing (hopefully) a long patch for the > 'firewalls' chapter that attempts to fix some of these inconsistencies > (and many others). While it is not exactly at review state yet, here is > what I got right now: > > http://people.freebsd.org/~manolis/firewalls.diff > > (this is still changing, but comments are welcome nonetheless) > > and a build is here: > > http://www.freebsdgr.org/handbook-mine/firewalls.html > > I originally missed this PR, but I could have a look at the submitted > text and integrate it with this patch, if appropriate. Better late than never. So I took a quick glance a this and found it to be pretty nice. I'll gladly give it a review when you feel it's ready to be committed. Thanks! -- Tom Rhodes