From owner-cvs-all Tue Apr 6 16: 3: 6 1999 Delivered-To: cvs-all@freebsd.org Received: from nothing-going-on.demon.co.uk (nothing-going-on.demon.co.uk [193.237.89.66]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id EBE2A14BEA; Tue, 6 Apr 1999 16:02:25 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from nik@nothing-going-on.demon.co.uk) Received: (from nik@localhost) by nothing-going-on.demon.co.uk (8.9.2/8.9.2) id AAA03428; Wed, 7 Apr 1999 00:00:16 +0100 (BST) (envelope-from nik) Date: Wed, 7 Apr 1999 00:00:16 +0100 From: Nik Clayton To: grog@freebsd.org Cc: cvs-all@freebsd.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en/handbook/kerneldebug chapter.sgml Message-ID: <19990406235936.A1494@catkin.nothing-going-on.org> References: <199904060126.SAA99319@freefall.freebsd.org> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii X-Mailer: Mutt 0.95.4i In-Reply-To: <199904060126.SAA99319@freefall.freebsd.org>; from Greg Lehey on Mon, Apr 05, 1999 at 06:26:25PM -0700 Organization: Nik at home, where there's nothing going on Sender: owner-cvs-all@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk On Mon, Apr 05, 1999 at 06:26:25PM -0700, Greg Lehey wrote: > grog 1999/04/05 18:26:25 PDT > > Modified files: > en/handbook/kerneldebug chapter.sgml > Log: > Tidy up displays so that they fit onto a printed page (sort of). > > Revision Changes Path > 1.12 +5 -4 doc/en/handbook/kerneldebug/chapter.sgml I've just had a look at this. The shifting of "...done" down on to its own line I can understand (if that's what the output actually looks like). But what's the
for? This isn't
material. If the formatting needs to be changed then it should be a change made in the stylesheet, not the documentation itself. Changing the markup to affect the presentation is not the right thing to do. Also, some of the other changes you've made to other files are line wrapping changes where the original output would not have been wrapped like this (contrib/chapter.sgml is an example, I think). Again, this might require a rethink of the stylesheets (perhaps dropping the size of the left indent) rather than an alteration of the content to fit. Cheers, N -- Bagel: The carbohydrate with the hole To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe cvs-all" in the body of the message