From owner-freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Sat Nov 5 15:49:03 2016 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 44903BED2CD for ; Sat, 5 Nov 2016 15:49:03 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from rockyhotas@post.com) Received: from mout.gmx.com (mout.gmx.com [74.208.4.200]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher DHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client CN "mail.gmx.com", Issuer "thawte SSL CA - G2" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id F3C923D4 for ; Sat, 5 Nov 2016 15:49:02 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from rockyhotas@post.com) Received: from [151.76.34.248] by 3capp-mailcom-lxa14.server.lan (via HTTP); Sat, 5 Nov 2016 16:49:00 +0100 MIME-Version: 1.0 Message-ID: From: "Rocky Hotas" To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: PAM Documentation Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Date: Sat, 5 Nov 2016 16:49:00 +0100 Importance: normal Sensitivity: Normal Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Priority: 3 X-Provags-ID: V03:K0:GJQ1RnYq+OP90f2OQL/MMY9Id5UkmyZGcBWFbe6jihv vpPREamxH+btwxLXkV+wiqkKudlm5WfoHvZyKZJpa9lWwDe3zv xo5QqcOQ1/UEIKcFqWNKZN6Suf33SX0sIa6UKjeAxwbqu5z40M 8T4I6JWO1pMvDPOnf7Q0trS8G6dojf4aWqmhIbd5tBo0byYATY YvFPTTsDdBtKKzNIrImkbPZW5R/lClyo2b0UoaRlAaqva5PFJ5 2pToQUceoChlvTqXrwIYkPxxTfa/BcFiK4hw2M212UDd2Vk5X1 r07n/NJMCJa1LRIiBQgb5FJ9v8F X-UI-Out-Filterresults: notjunk:1;V01:K0:6zKYY8G4MVE=:2JisJymlGYb9Tw1WJYo1ZV zgKo66N38t0nn0UFr89/vv968E61qCaut/1Kvx4W/VJic55SKpgY5WYko2cVz8TEHTPv6AbU2 MizPFTT4tGuxAk9mV6vEpNba5wZfBjMbFslwzQbrIG4Phu3rK6iLB9OkCbW5sl5gx9eCub3YA 3agO+o/YfJT5qDrYvVCkAfNDpOcLmn5JQNkiweOruQJnduVEmhLZgXAQq2RAhI2RdnOnry1Ac CLQnh8T0JByHglYXtVVugjy2wEaxMmUkXNexljXuXlg+nRwIHuGviAutGmaGve1V4dXScIQqp IEivHuy/eGnfrSRFF2GsH3bvv3i89izhkpAucXW0zojbUlzCn5SmrksSL8TYBoNsAgAE4ITr1 0V5qt5rxFvNh8zM3eFXa1Z69sK+m/yNFxWLBFHYRsw4CUcXUdT7XKzgWzJ47e1IrzK1ZYAfDH S+TIRrouWQ== X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.23 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 05 Nov 2016 15:49:03 -0000 Hello! I would like to signal some issues in the FreeBSD PAM Documentation, avail= able at link: https://www=2Efreebsd=2Eorg/doc/en_US=2EISO8859-1/articles/pam/ 1) Even if maybe PAM isn't so often updated, this guide is "Copyright =C2= =A9 2001-2003", so maybe too much old=2E 2) Chapters 6 and 7 are blank=2E 3) Section 2=2E2=2E3 is about a "Sample policy"=2E It could be a /etc/pam= =2Ed/sshd example file, the only example in the whole guide (wouldn't be mo= re convenient to add other examples?)=2E The elements of the configuration = files are listed; but what about the actions that PAM will take following t= hat configuration lines? In particular, informations about the order (why h= ave the lines be sorted in such an order) and the possible actions caused b= y each lines are missing=2E This is also related to: 4) Can the Table 1 in Section 4=2E3 be better and more explicitly explaine= d? I think it is not possible to understand it very well as it is now=2E Thanks for your help=2E Bye, Rocky