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From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Sun, 23 Sep 2001 19:17:48 -0700 (PDT)
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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/explaining-bsd article.sgml
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murray      2001/09/23 19:17:48 PDT

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/explaining-bsd article.sgml 
  Log:
  - Use <firstterm> instead of <emphasis> when introducing a new technical
    term.
  - Add missing words to form a complete sentence.
  - Markup the first instance of STABLE the same as the first instance of
    CURRENT.
  
  PR:		docs/30774, docs/30773
  Submitted by:	Giorgos Keramidas <charon@labs.gr>
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.4       +11 -8     doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/explaining-bsd/article.sgml


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